This one is definitely my favorite chapter. Thank you THANK YOU for not making her ditzy or spazzy or any of the other plot devices used to destroy Lily's character. I LOOVE it!

I love your characterization of Peter! Excellent.

Again, interesting. I like it!

Interesting Remus. I don't see him this way, but it's still a very plausible look at his character.

Awwr, you made James such a cutie! I can't believe I just said that, but 'tis true.

Great character interpretation! you deserve your awards!

Interesting idea about Sirius personality.
Ciao!

So he is so perfect to be imperfect too :-)
Nice portrait.
Ciao!

What a fun ending!

I agree that Peter couldn't start bad. He must have had some moments where there didn't seem to be another choice.

Great picture of self-awareness, there.

What a nice mingling of the sadness of Remus's life with the compensations he has through his friends.

Great picture of James. I wonder why he didn't check his map for Filch before he left, though?

i think that you did a great job portraying all of these characters! congrats on writing so well!

A brilliant end. I think I may have actually reviewed this a while ago, I remember reading it, but enjoyed it so much the second time round I figure you won't mind a second review. Lily is practically perfect, in my opinion. Her worries and longings are so very much the way I see her. I love the end of the chapter and her ability to let it all go. Overall though, I'd have to say Sirius was my favourite, with Lily second. Thank-you so much!