"Holy - !" McGee exclaimed, more surprised by the sudden attack than the naked body straddling him, but then adjusted to the sight and was even more shocked. "Boobs . . . I mean, Ziva?! What the hell are you doing here? And why are you naked? And why are you in bed with me? And why am I naked?"

Even though this was actually the only bit of the fic I'd previously read, it still made me laugh when McGee involuntarily said boobs instead of her name. Poor guy, I can easily imagine that! Heehee

Boobs! LMAO Funny as hell!

Okay... this was fun and random...

very cute

you are right that is a crack fic great job.

lol, loved it :)

OMG! Hahahaha! I laughed soo hard! lol Really that Ziva is somethin! Loved it! Totally loved it!

Cute and fun :-) I think it is interesting that McGee could even think when he was presented with Ziva au naturel... Intriguing characters, thanks for posting.

Hee! This made me laugh so many times. I just can totally - for some odd reason - imagine Ziva going out of her way to get McGee to sleep with her. Completely hilarious, fantastic ending. (As always.)

-MissFlapjack

All of this is very good, but how exactly did she run out into the hall while she's buck naked?

AH YO AMAZING FANFIC WRITING PERSON YOO!

Bloody amazing! I couldnt stop laughing, ah!

thank you!

Jodie xx

That's nice. Who was on the other end of the walkie-talkie?

Oh My gosh! this was funny,as soon as i read the summary it brought a smile to my face,its ,i mean u can pictue them together,but then its like,no way,nothing more than emotional connection b/tw these then again it is just a fanfic,and a comedy at .good .

dont mind me saying this but this was really cheesy yeah but it made me laugh (the walkie talkie part) was funny

that fic was good ant it was funney hope you rite more of these kind of ziva mcgee fic