Reviews for MarySue's Bad Hair Day

Reviews For: MarySue's Bad Hair Day

Juvenile Success 2008-01-31 ch 1,	abuseI think lol is incredibly appropriate here.
SockMonkey101 2007-11-14 ch 1,	abuseI just read "Only the Young" and I needed something happy. This worked! YAY! Ah, so many cliches, so little a fanfic! Personally, I would have given her a ridiculously long name (Maria Elizabeth Grizelda Flora Athena Mary Artemis Bloomington would do nicely, and she goes by Moe) but that was the only thing I would have changed. Well, I kind of like Mary-Sue, come to think of it. :) Not really much else to say, except that it would be lovely if you continued. Pretty please with sugar on top? Well wishes, Sock Monkey
Another Illusion 2007-07-12 ch 1,	abuseI love this parody and I hope you continue it. You clearly have a talent for writing humorously :) Another Illusion
Bambola 2007-07-09 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow. That was hilarious! I loved it. I must say, my favourite part was, "She speaks every language in the world except Arabic, Australian, Connecticutian, and a few dead ones that no one cares about, like Latin and Canadian." I must say that, myself being from the mysterious country of Canada, the Canadian language is, infact, dead. I mean, I have never in my life heard the word "aboot". Yes, depressing, but true (insert eyeroll here). Well, anyways, great job! I would like to know who this "impervious" (Pfft, yeah right! Only Mary-Sue has the power to be impervious to Mary-Sue. EVERYONE knows that) character is... Bambola
Bailey 2007-07-09 ch 1, anon.	abuselmao! very nice! I love the thing about her hair! And Soda in a matching evening gown, priceless! Very good story, keep it up.
OneManShow 2007-07-09 ch 1,	abuseHahah. Just reading the summary made me crack up. =]
Queen Jane Approximately 2007-07-09 ch 1,	abuseBest. Parody. Ever. And I'm not just saying that because I've read it before and I remember, like, every line, lol. But it really is -- and it's hilarious. "The Mary-Sue that Could Not." I LOVE THAT. "The ingredients had been purchased at the store by none other than the head of the house himself, Darrel Curtis, for which he received peculiar looks from the older women. He ignored them." I could just picture that, and I was cracking up. "I thought you were dead? No, just very weak. You can’t take this away from me. I need this job." Lmao, I love that. Especially the 'No, just very weak' -- I don't know why. "Her Mary-Sue credentials, for which she studied at the top Mary-Sue institutes in the world, are so extensive that only a small portion can be listed, but here we go: She speaks every language in the world except Arabic, Australian, Connecticutian, and a few dead ones that no one cares about, like Latin and Canadian." I didn't know Connecticutian and Australian were languages, lol. I suppose in the world of Ted, they are ... "Fine. Her long hair was magnificently cascading down her back. She was wearing… You really sleep in that? (It breathes.) She was wearing a green, pink polka-dotted evening gown. Naturally, she was a trendsetter, so no one thought this odd. In fact, Sodapop soon entered the kitchen dressed in a matching evening gown." Absolutely fabulous. The only sane character (trapped) in the story ... Ted? :) Lol. You must write more. I love this. (As I love everything you write.) But this is awesome. :D
soda-me 2007-07-09 ch 1,	abuseAHAHA! Mary-Sues are getting what they deserve lately, it seems. I just hope parodies aren't the things that get overdone now...but I will never get sick of something like this, I don't think. My favourite part was the description of her eyes and hair. Nice.
Beatelyluck 2007-07-09 ch 1,	abuseOh hehehehe I hate Mary-Sue. So many stories here are just full of her. Bleh. I love this. Great parody. :)
SamanthaMae 2007-07-08 ch 1,	abuse"In fact, Sodapop soon entered the kitchen dressed in a matching evening gown." BAHAHAHAHA I laughed so hard I was caught being up too late. Oh my god, that was the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Great job! Hilarious!

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