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Nicki
2008-05-29
ch 1, anon.
abusePlease yell me you intend to write an NC17 follow up to this? It's just evil to leave us hanging there.
Kayla
2008-03-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh wow. Asgard Strippers!?:) Brilliant, you are so creative... I LOVE the characters in this, Sam, Jack, Danny, Teal'c and Jan were all perfect and they complimented the story so nicely. You must be a very good physics teacher, because I actually understood your explanation (or Sam's) of the uncertainty principle. However you are an even better writer, and is it to much to ask that you take it on as a full time career? Come on...:) Awesome fic, as always.
docderentis
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abusehot damn! that was...whew! right up to the very end.
Nici
2008-01-10
ch 1, anon.
abuse2 words. Love it
STC
2008-01-09
ch 1, anon.
abusePlease don't leave us hanging there!?? Stop teasing!! How about a sequel??
BrenRenQoI
2007-12-31
ch 1,
abuseThat was a Great story!
daleia
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abuseaw
You are SO gifted for those Sam/Jacks stories!
VisualIDentificationZeta
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abusewow, this was hot! but a romantic in me wishes them to be fully prepared and willing to deal with repercussions of unprotected sex (there's no way they'd get STDs cause they are checked every day).
SuperNovaGirl
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abusetotally awsome!
ArafelSedai
2007-10-29
ch 1,
abuseHere Here; Slainte! Love the cheese!

It is ok to wait on Tantalus, as long as you titilate us with sublime drabble like this 8-)

Ah such fun... why can't the "writers" see the truth of it all
Bunnylass
2007-09-10
ch 1,
abuseWow...you could definetly feel the tension coming in waves! Lol.

It was very well written, i love the idea, very clever.

The last part at the end,

"As their mouths melded in a dance as old as the heavens, a shooting star streaked overhead, blazing a path through the night sky with fevered intensity.

It was a portent of many good things to come."

Perfect ending :)
Natters
2007-07-25
ch 1,
abusegood
dietcokechic
2007-07-23
ch 1,
abuse::GRIN:: God, I adored this little ficlet of yours! Hon, you can write short stories, just as well as long ones. Favorite moment (well, before the really *good* stuff happened):
“You were the last one to see her! What the hell did you say to her?”

Jack’s face was blank for a moment. Then, frowning slightly, he seemed to make a connection. “I may have called her a golf ball.”

LOL! So Jack! Give in to your short story desires and write more when time permits. You did good!
ARomanticAtHeart
2007-07-15
ch 1,
abuseabsolutely giggleworthy!
Dreaming of Jack
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abusewow... this was just one of the best I have ever read.
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