 Jems 2009-10-29 . chapter 1 Hi!
I've introduced myself to Stargate fanfiction very recently, and I'm so glad that I was familiar with this site already - I knew exactly what to look for, and I found your work. :)
I've read your 4 SJ one-shots (sorry for not reviewing earlier) and I must say that you're an absolutely brilliant writer. There are lots of poorly written fics out there, but you seem to have it all. The characterization is perfect. I can see all the characters clearly in my head, and they could NOT get any more canon! Your writing flows wonderfully, as well. The whole package is amazingly flawless.
I'm afraid I'm running out of praise words! Well, I'm sure you get the point. Your writing is just the way I like it, and I'll be sure to take a look at those longer stories you have once I have enough time. :)
Keep them coming, you're doing a magnificent job!
- Jems |
 JSFOREVER 2009-08-12 . chapter 1 I absolutely love your story, it felt as if you really had planned it out especially when you brought it back in the end that Jack likes golf. I so loved that!
Short summary: One really romantic-packed one shot that had everything!
Keep them coming please! |
 Child-of-the-Dawn 2009-04-11 . chapter 1"No one was especially surprised when Teal’c won."
I LOVED the Sam/Jack so so much, but I gotta say your use of Teal'c was so in character and so much fun to read! |
 Nicki 2008-05-29 . chapter 1 Please yell me you intend to write an NC17 follow up to this? It's just evil to leave us hanging there. |
 Kayla 2008-03-25 . chapter 1 Oh wow. Asgard Strippers!?:) Brilliant, you are so creative... I LOVE the characters in this, Sam, Jack, Danny, Teal'c and Jan were all perfect and they complimented the story so nicely. You must be a very good physics teacher, because I actually understood your explanation (or Sam's) of the uncertainty principle. However you are an even better writer, and is it to much to ask that you take it on as a full time career? Come on...:) Awesome fic, as always. |
 docderentis 2008-02-19 . chapter 1hot damn! that was...whew! right up to the very end. |
 Nici 2008-01-10 . chapter 1 2 words. Love it |
 STC 2008-01-09 . chapter 1 Please don't leave us hanging there!?? Stop teasing!! How about a sequel?? |
 BrenRenQoI 2007-12-31 . chapter 1That was a Great story! |
 daleia 2007-12-08 . chapter 1aw
You are SO gifted for those Sam/Jacks stories! |
 VisualIDentificationZeta 2007-11-09 . chapter 1wow, this was hot! but a romantic in me wishes them to be fully prepared and willing to deal with repercussions of unprotected sex (there's no way they'd get STDs cause they are checked every day). |
 SuperNovaGirl 2007-11-03 . chapter 1totally awsome! |
 ArafelSedai 2007-10-29 . chapter 1Here Here; Slainte! Love the cheese!
It is ok to wait on Tantalus, as long as you titilate us with sublime drabble like this 8-)
Ah such fun... why can't the "writers" see the truth of it all |
 Bunnylass 2007-09-10 . chapter 1Wow...you could definetly feel the tension coming in waves! Lol.
It was very well written, i love the idea, very clever.
The last part at the end,
"As their mouths melded in a dance as old as the heavens, a shooting star streaked overhead, blazing a path through the night sky with fevered intensity.
It was a portent of many good things to come."
Perfect ending :) |
 Natters 2007-07-25 . chapter 1good |