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| Nicki 2008-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease yell me you intend to write an NC17 follow up to this? It's just evil to leave us hanging there. |
| Kayla 2008-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh wow. Asgard Strippers!?:) Brilliant, you are so creative... I LOVE the characters in this, Sam, Jack, Danny, Teal'c and Jan were all perfect and they complimented the story so nicely. You must be a very good physics teacher, because I actually understood your explanation (or Sam's) of the uncertainty principle. However you are an even better writer, and is it to much to ask that you take it on as a full time career? Come on...:) Awesome fic, as always. |
| docderentis 2008-02-19 ch 1,  | abusehot damn! that was...whew! right up to the very end. |
| Nici 2008-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuse2 words. Love it |
| STC 2008-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease don't leave us hanging there!?? Stop teasing!! How about a sequel?? |
| BrenRenQoI 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was a Great story! |
| daleia 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseaw You are SO gifted for those Sam/Jacks stories! |
| VisualIDentificationZeta 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abusewow, this was hot! but a romantic in me wishes them to be fully prepared and willing to deal with repercussions of unprotected sex (there's no way they'd get STDs cause they are checked every day). |
| SuperNovaGirl 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abusetotally awsome! |
| ArafelSedai 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseHere Here; Slainte! Love the cheese! It is ok to wait on Tantalus, as long as you titilate us with sublime drabble like this 8-) Ah such fun... why can't the "writers" see the truth of it all |
| Bunnylass 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseWow...you could definetly feel the tension coming in waves! Lol. It was very well written, i love the idea, very clever. The last part at the end, "As their mouths melded in a dance as old as the heavens, a shooting star streaked overhead, blazing a path through the night sky with fevered intensity. It was a portent of many good things to come." Perfect ending :) |
| Natters 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abusegood |
| dietcokechic 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuse::GRIN:: God, I adored this little ficlet of yours! Hon, you can write short stories, just as well as long ones. Favorite moment (well, before the really *good* stuff happened): “You were the last one to see her! What the hell did you say to her?” Jack’s face was blank for a moment. Then, frowning slightly, he seemed to make a connection. “I may have called her a golf ball.” LOL! So Jack! Give in to your short story desires and write more when time permits. You did good! |
| ARomanticAtHeart 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseabsolutely giggleworthy! |
| Dreaming of Jack 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abusewow... this was just one of the best I have ever read. |