Not dead you say? LOL. But actually, nix the last chapter (maybe post it as the first chap. of a sequel?) and it's a complete and awesome story. And may I repeat the word awesome? Because this story rocks. Even though it has an OC, which makes it at least four times more difficult to write, and thus all the more impressive in my mind. (I love her, by the way, and she's not a mary sue at all--I'm not sure why, because she's awesome and kick ass and saves the day at least twice, which is sort of the definition of mary sue, but somehow she comes off as a real, interesting and attractive person instead of a stereotype.) Speaking of OCs, I don't know transformers well enough to know if Whiplash is one. If he is, I am even more impressed, since he's a ton of fun, especially with his speech problem (which makes me want to give him a hug. That kind of thing is so very frustrating and embarrassing (I do a lot of travel in places where I don't speak the language and people have to guess what words I mean because the ones I said don't make any sense contextually.)
Um, yeah. I loved it. Thank you for giving me a pleasant way to spend a lonely Saturday.

Do you live? At all? This is nice, and it'd be great to see an update on it.
Looking forward to more, I love your wisecracks. Keep writing!

This is one great story. You should really update this that last chapter has real tension

I want a boxen of donuts after reading all this excitement. ^_^ Went and listened to 'Intense Colors' on youtube after your little note about using that song as inspiration for the tornado scene. There's a moment near the end...the music sorta holds one note out real long and pauses...and then jumps right back in all rock-tastically. I've now got this picture in my head of Whip and Nic right then doing a slow-mo scraping the edges of the tornado...and then rocketing past as the music picks up again. Fun song. ^_^

Take me, Soundwave. Take me hard.

Buffy ref! Grr, argh.

Oh, your portrayal of Soundwave was so very cool. I mean, I love him and adore him and want to bear his anatomically improbable babies, but that doesn't mean I hold any illusions about his warm fuzzies. Soundwave is sinister and he is Hot.

Wow, that was gripping! I've never written a car chase before, so that was really fascinating. I wonder if it's as difficult as it looks? You deserve a medal for that chapter.

Great Story! Please finish it :)

D: > NO NIC! No Whiplash! This story is great! I must find out what happens soon lol

Amazing simply amazing! That jump scene was brilliant!

This is very addicting. I'll have to read the rest tomorrow. Damn you work!

Love this story so far. cant wait to read more. : )

I Love This Story!! Please Update SOON!

i have to say this is one of the most addictive and well-flowing fics i've seen in this fandom
though i haven't explored much, even when i have, i still think yours will remain as one of the better ones :>