Reviews for Troublesome Dreams

Reviews For: Troublesome Dreams

RagdollStuffy 2005-12-27 ch 1,	abuseNice songfic :) FYI, story has been Archived
Rev+Harper4ever 2004-08-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseLOL ^_^ This is great! I hope you write more soon!
Mary R 2001-07-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it. It's very profound and you did a good job of capturing the characters.
SireenC 2001-07-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseYet another wonderful story. Great job!
Lady MR 2001-07-23 ch 1,	abuseYour firsts sonfic! This is definitly good! Harper, poor Harper...
~Becky~ bekybob13@aol.com 2001-07-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww, really sad story! Good job though! Perfect song. :)
Zion's Starfish 2001-07-22 ch 1,	abuseHi Darkniteangel! Usually I'm not a fan of songfics, but in this case, the lyrics added to the haunting feel of your story. This is one of my favorite parts: "Is something wrong?" Came a familiar voice from behind him. It was Rev Bem. "Yeah, We need a new adapter." Harper said as he wiped his hands off and threw the cloth aside. ... "What I really mean is why aren't you asleep. Troublesome dreams?" Great intro. I wasn't sure about this part, though: "You know what I've noticed about you? You're not too open with people. Why is that?"Rev inquired. IMHO, it seems a little abrupt. Rev's treading on shaky ground here. Would he ease into the conversation a little more slowly? But overall I liked Harper's interaction with Rev and I think it's strong enough to stand on its own, without Dylan's entry, but again, that's just my opinion =) My other favorite part is Rev's insight about Pax. I never thought about it quite that way. Super job!
Anna M. 2001-07-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood job! I like stories in which Harper is shown more mature. Well done.
brat64 2001-07-21 ch 1,	abusei think it was quite wonderfull. i've only wrote one songfic, but this is one of the best ones i have ever seen. :)) I agree with u, bent and harper go really good together. :))

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