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Lina03
2009-12-25 . chapter 1
It's so achingly sad, I cried...
Moonmixer
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
This fic seriously makes me cry. I getting all choked up and feel miserable especially near the end. I really want to help Bee somehow but there's no way. It makes me forget that this is just fictional. But the fact that Bumblebee only remembers Sam's touch and the fact that he was important is so upsetting.
I'm definatly not saying this story is written horribly. In fact, I'd recommend it if I knew how. My heart is breaking and I'm still crying. Oh, and it's worse than if he forgets everything. I'm sorry but this story really touched me and I had to get my feelings across. Immortality is horrible especially immortality like that. Sorry if I'm incohersive in my review. I feel helpless.
IVIoonAngel
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
I've never been moved to tears by such a short story before. x_X Thanks for that...I think...
Uniasus
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Bee *sniffs* Love this fic ^_^
leleana
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
Oh god, just like everyone else, at the final line, I just lost it. Absolutely beautiful and heartwrenching!
Little Miss Molly
2009-05-04 . chapter 1
God damn you. Make me cry. -bawls-
esther
2009-01-13 . chapter 1
the last line. it shattered me. brilliant. i'm all choked up now. fantastic.
eshuff
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
*gasp* stunning writing! the slow degradation of memory until only touch remains...really beautiful, painful and heartbreaking!

I really love how you write!
Jinx
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Wow...just, wow. That was ... amazing.
April Raven Girl
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this, even as sad as it was! So many fanfics ignore the inevitable or use magical work-arounds to escape the fact that humans life spans are so brief compared to the nearly ageless TFs. This was very well done!
Deadly Melody
2008-03-26 . chapter 1
This is insanely beautiful. Like most everyone else, I cried. Wonderful job.
HitokiriKurisuta
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
That was. . . both terribly depressing and unimaginably sweet.
In short: I loved it. lol

Great work on this.
Ace of Dreams
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
Beautiful fic. It was very short, but went straight to the point and was so very sad. Poor Bumblebee.
Tatsumaki-sama
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
*sobs* That was so sad. Time is indeed the thief, stealing Bumblebee's memories of Sam, his voice, his words, even his name. Except for that warmth of Sam's hands. Great job!
EasterOfFlesh
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
WAH. This makes me tear up every time I read it. *WIBBLE* I've noticed that not that many writers address this. That Bumblebee is going to live a REALLY long time after Sam. It's a tragedy waiting to happen! Maybe they're in denial too. ;_;
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