awsum love it and cant wait for the next part.

OMG! Awesome! I love these kinda stories. It was funny how she was bored watching them fight...btw what's the girls name?More please!

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MORE!

hey this is great!! can't wait to see what happens next ^_^ update soon

You know what? This is great. no, this is beyond great. This is TANFASTIC! Oh yes, you read right. TANfastic. Better than fantastic. Better than a whole lotta crap I've seen (and probably typing >.