Tell me Naruto…do you know…of the Kyuubi no Kitsune?

That lives on Drewy Lane?

I have to tell you your story as-is is great. Yes its got the Super-Naruto Syndrome and uber-powered OCs but they have a reason for being that powerful. They had people like Itachi and the others to teach them and without the restrictions that would have been imposed on training in Konoha. Naruto likely didn't get as powerful as he is easily, there are no shortcuts. He likely suffered to get as good as he is now, and the same holds for Uindo and his sister Hinote.

Fem-Haku being Naruto's girlfriend is nice touch. I'm a sucker for Fem-Haku stories and Naru-Anko stories. What?! Don't tell me those two couldn't get along or fall in love eventually. Naruto the Prankster Genius combined with Anko's borderline psychotic sense of humor, poor Konoha wouldn't know what hit it.

Anywho, I'm looking forward to a continuation or the rewrite. Please update soon.

I forgot to say this in the review for chapter 14, and the one-review-per-chapter rule won't let me add it for that chapter.

Salaam = Farsi
Peace = English
Salaam = Peace
Farsi = SomeSortOfArabic

*speechless*

What does AU mean? I've never asked anyone, and it bothers me because it's everywhere.

Possible translations of AU:

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Anus of Uber-hell

Anus Uncovered

Author's bUnny (you know, the plot bunny)

the Anus of lUcifer

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As anyone with three digits IQ can see, the A and U is capitalized, to show what words are the AU letters.

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You are great. If I were to write a flame, I would have problems, and my imagination is extreme.

Time: 1:41am
Date: January/ 2009

First off I would like to congratulate you in writing a fantastic and awesome Naruto fanfic. I was wrapped from day 1, when i first tentativly search for a new Naruto/Haku to read.

In my opinion the best thing your story offers is character detail, I felt a conection to every single character in the story. Admitadly so far less of one towards Zabuza and Haku but there is a connection.

Secondly I love you story fight scene's, they are ridiculously well detailed, so much so they play in my head as anime. I loved every single one of them.

Finally I love the way you forge your characters into the story, nobody is left unused, forgotten or left out. Everyone has their own little piece of the pie. However small the piece might have been *glances at Kidoumaru, Jiroubo and Sakon*. Esspecially your OC's in my experience, i have hated OC's from the mention of their name. However your's gripped me, like and iron fist around my neck. Hinote's obsession with sasuke kept me laughing and Uindo's bond with Naruto gives me this awesome sence of brotherhood.

The only critism I have is perhaps not enough romance, I understand it has too be built and develop, but perhaps a slight tatse maybe to whet our appetites would have done the readers some good.

Other then that, Thankyou ever so much for this story. I enjoyed it more then words can describe.

Take care and keep up the writing.

-Blazing Mako

isnt naruto a bit to matured?

Respect. I truly, wholly respect you for doing this. Most people don't ever give us a detailed reason why they're on hiatus, but you actually care.

I hope you update some day, as this is truly in my top five for the best fanfics I've ever read.

May your future be blessed with keystrokes and glowing reviews.

Ever faithful to fanfic,
Soren

Not bad

i love this story plz update soon again

It could be that Itachi used his ...erm.. last stage of sharaigan(sp) to train Naruto so that one second was three days.

Excellent chapter. A little long winded, but all in all good.

This is difficult what you're doing. Not everyone has the gall to write a fic like this. Oh, and where the hellfire is Haku? She's the whole reason I signed up for this.

Soren

A highly enjoyable first chapter. Quite a few spelling mistakes though. Mostly grammar.

An excellent AU fic. Would accurately describe how everything would have gone if a few things had been different.

Thanks for this, I'll read on.

Soren

A fellow reviewer of mine said there isn't a douche on this site that could tell you what to do, I am afraid he has yet to meet me, Sir Chris, humor writer and very big douche as it so happens.

Coming from a guy who had writer's block for 15 months, I feel your pain, I really do. I went 15 months without updating a single thing on my beloved death story. I also want you to realize something though, you are on . Remember your target audience. These are the same people who would say "great job!" to crappy fics, and I've seen them do so before.

Do what you want, but I can tell you that your story is majorly flawed, but it is also amusing and good. Best thing to do for wrtier's block is to force yourself to write random crap, I'd suggest writing a humor story about Itachi and a harem and just make up the words and the laughs as you go along.

It is amazing how badly bastardizing serious and beloved characters can make the block go away.

Anyway don't be so dramatic it is bad for the soul and the writing.

Told you I was a douche!

Sorry if you don't like my words, not in the business of being all serious and stuff, but you seem to be really loathing your writing when you have no real cause to, you just suck all at planning, which can be remedied by not planning.

Crazy idea, I know.

- Chris

Alright buddy, I'm in complete understanding with you. I've tried to write at least 5 chapters of my own fic, but just freakin' can't. So its understandable; but as for the "adopt an idea", I'd love to do that. So I'll be checking that out.
Hope you get your story up and running in the near future. Been a long time fan.

~ Later ~

You just earned enough respect from me to equal all of the other authors in this fandom... combined! I have alot of the same problems you face with your fic, and I'm tempted to go back (again) and rewrite everything (again), but between university and real life, time is a luxury I can't/won't spend on just messing around with fanfiction. Sure, I still read more fanfics than I should, but the time I used to have for writing has been severly cut.

No matter what you decide to do, you've reasoned enough and not a single douche here can deny you the right to do with your fic whatever the ** you want. Good luck deciding, although I, as a NaruHaku-fanboy, hopes to see you back one day.

Best regards
-VyseN