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| CaramelMonkey 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I agree Vala was really straight forward but Daniel didnt have to be such an idiot!! LOL cool fic |
| Whirlwind421 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseI love it!! It's wonderful and sweet!! |
| J. Bredin 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseVery nice writing. Unending left a lot to be desired and you did something to fill in that gap. I like how you used some of the original dialog. I couldn't believe how harsh Daniel was in that last episode. Glad it all worked out in the end :) |
| Briar Elwood 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseOH! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! GOING ON MY FAVES, THIS WAS BRILLIANT! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! *runs off to indulge herself in DV* -Briar |
| CindyLou13 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseCute alternate ending to "Unending." I like it much better than the original. Thanks for writing. |
| Gwenfrewi72 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Very nice. |
| QuasiOuster 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseBravo! I loved Daniel's line about Vala hurting him when he thought she was flirting and he wanted more. That's really good! I so enjoyed the story and you did a wonderful job of using the characters in the most interesting ways possible. Really well done and quite believable. |
| starjems88 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuselove it. |
| spacegypsy1 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseGood fic. Loved the Vala and Teal'c on the floor scene. I was stopped in my tracks by the Chocolate eye thing though, Daniel's are blue. Good work otherwise! |
| Spyridon 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI would say Jack's eyes are chocolate, but in the show, Daniel's eyes are blue. Otherwise great little snippet for Unending. |
| Milena D. 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, loved the title! And second of all, I wish beyond wishing that this would happen in the show! Thanks for giving us an awesome getting-together scene! |
| Izu-nu 2007-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuse... |
| Samvalasam 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abusevery nicely done :D sam |
| acer-sigma 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Really its only a matter of time that the two would have a confrontation over their feelings back in the regular timeline. Plus given what happened in the future timeline, its more than likely it would have gone the same way, only this time Vala would have had some place to retreat to. So once again great job. |
| miss evil ishtar 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseaw thats so adorable, daniel and vala make a really kawaii couple. good work on the story ^^ |