 Archaetype 3/5/04 . chapter 1 Interesting piece to say the least. Good character development, and it holds the reader's interest. If there's any more, I'd enjoy reading it. |
 Naya Zephronic 3/17/03 . chapter 4wonderful outstanding great cool neat...umm what other words can i use theat i know how to spell...?
Naya |
 Illusion's Shadow 2/11/03 . chapter 4O.O Awesome! That was so cool... XD |
 Sailor Star Griever 1/31/03 . chapter 4What a great read! I was captivated and inspired at the same time. I do have two questions though.
1. Is "Sonic" supposed to be Shadow?
2. Would you mind if I did a continuation of this fic from "Sonic's" P.O.V.?
Shadow |
 meichan-24 10/19/02 . chapter 4This is just too adorable! Please write more...can't wait for the rest! |
 SegaMon 9/19/01 . chapter 4 8/10 (I have to allow a little room for improvement to take place...) Very great! Can't wait until the upcomming chapters! |
 JohnT33 8/28/01 . chapter 1 It's a really good story, with just one problem: Dr. Gerald's supposed to be kind-hearted; he wouldn't eliminate a whole race of echidnas just to get at the emeralds. Also, I thought it was Chaos, not Dr. Gerald, who eliminated them. |
 Sakura Isthill 8/24/01 . chapter 4 Ooooh, pretty fic! And well written! But why The Shadow Story if Shadow's not in it? |
 Juleswriter 7/24/01 . chapter 4Great Stuff! This looks very good, way to go! Sonic saves the day!
Keep it up, Jules. |
 Angelwind 7/24/01 . chapter 3Are you going to continue this? Its VERY good so far! |
 TalonZero 7/23/01 . chapter 1 Nicely done so far, keep it up! |
 Alter-Ego 7/22/01 . chapter 3Ooooh...cool. Please continue. Please please please please please! |
 GoldenHopeSakura 7/22/01 . chapter 2I enjoyed reading this very much. I hope the author makes more fanfictions in the future. |
 GoliathanTMC 7/22/01 . chapter 3Hey, pretty good! I'll keep reading this WIP. Sorry I didn't read it earlier-I could barely read last night. But don't let this die on us. Pleese... |
 Kevin 7/22/01 . chapter 3 COOL! |