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sakura-med-ninja-93
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
love it ^^
Malfoy's Kitten
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
love it
Black Light Brightness
2009-09-27 . chapter 33
grt. y!
Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf
2009-09-17 . chapter 33
ah! ^_^ Finished! Overall very nice story! ^_^ oh! You I think you misspelled the name when the call came for Kagome about Sango being captured. Where she was, I mean. ^_^

Honestly... I was looking for another chapter when it ended. *laughs* Not that it Needs it... just was ready for it. A happy ending, with enough things left open to wonder. Have to admit I was hoping to see some way for healthy babies for Sesshomaru & Kagome, but as that arc of the story spelled out rather nicely they don't need pups to have their love.

Thanks!
Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf
2009-09-17 . chapter 25
Loving the story so far! Although... it would have been nice to have Sesshomaru's fur situation described in the first chapter. Had to readjust my mental image of him after the story was underway which was a bit confusing.

I'm a little confused with the jump from cuddling on the couch to the sudden letter to the priest at the end of this chapter. huh? Where did Kagome & Sesshomaru get the letter? Why are they reading it now? It didn't seem like they were about to read a letter but suddenly Boom, there it is. O_o Just seems really out of place and random. With everything else flowing pretty well I was wondering if maybe something either was not showing up or had accidentally been cut out or skipped at some point.

Thanks!
shareece
2009-08-07 . chapter 33
updates updates i need updates
darkangel0212
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
keep up the good work on your stories
Silver Volken Raven
2009-07-08 . chapter 33
This fanfic was something. I liked all the plot-holes and character-roles. Noriko is amazing! XD A true femme fatale. I was kind of disappointed that the Tashio (lol doesn't he have a name?) was a conniving, honorless bastard-but I liked the change .> The small Sango/Hiten was a nice change too. Don't get me wrong, I like Sango/Miroku, but something new is nice once in a while. Anywho, your fanfiction was great and I enjoyed reading! (Especially the battle of the Daiyoukai-Sesshoumaru and the Tashio)
Sapphire Birthstone
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
great story , but what happened to A sentinel Mother?
inu-babe34
2009-06-13 . chapter 33
*eyes tear up* NO! i can't believe that it's over DX i was reading this non-stop for three days reading it, and now it's over, idk what to do with myself anymore! Okay, maybe i'm being a bit dramatic ;D but i really did love this story with a passion, everything about it was interesting!! I'm begging u 2 write more, your writing is just to good to hold back on! Till the next time ya have a story out(hopefully very soon!) thank you, and goodbye!
Azumigurl
2009-05-29 . chapter 3
cool
Koshivuh
2009-05-18 . chapter 33
Amazing
Goten54
2009-05-04 . chapter 33
XD I have always enjoyed this story
Awesome job ^-^
bookwrm150
2009-04-28 . chapter 8
um first i want to say that i like reading your story, but i know that if i made an error in my chapter i would like to know. Now i haven't read anything farther than chapter 8 but if this chapter you state that shessy is 2 centuries old, then toward the end u say that he has been handling investments for centurIES. meaning more than 2. If shessy is always grammatically correct then he should say 'over a century'

just thought i should let you know
Memories on Pause
2009-04-14 . chapter 33
This story was not what I expected. The thought of a hairy Sesshoumaru, ick. I'm imagining Wolverine in long silver hair, LOL. But's its okay, I loved the story how.
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