pretty...*hearts*

*has no useful constructive criticism. goes back to saying oh, pretty...*

Hm... I am thinking Lina/Xelloss, for a couple of reasons.

1: the girl says "I never knew you could be romantic" This suits Xelloss, because, as everyone knows, mazoku are not supposed to love.

2: She shakes her hair out. I could be wrong, but for someone to shake thier hair out, it has to be long. Amelia does not have long hair, Lina does.

3: its says she takes her pants off, Filia does not wear pants.

Anyway, good story, it was very well written.

ewewewewe!

SO BEAUTIFUL

SO WONDERFUL

SO GREAT

SO... PERFECT!

Oooh! I like! It could be any couple, but I keep seeing Zel and Amelia, personally. Hehe. It fits them so well! I really like how you did this.

Hee hee, I think I know who they are...

lina n zel, rah?

*Guilty of an L/z Pairing*

Awwww how kawaii! _ I think of the couple as...*ponders over the events of the story and puts a face on the characters* Zel and Amelia. Just curious, who did you see it as when you wrote it?

oooh! i loved this! it was lina and gourry right? ;; haha, i loved it. thats so sweet...;_;

I'm going to say I think it is or should be Z/A :P:P:P _

WHO WERE THEY? i was thinking either lina and xel or lina and zel.