This was cute:)

oh my god loved it!

This story gave me the giggles so much. I would love to read Maggie and Ratchet's story lol.

awesome!
you should really continue

Glad his parents finally accepted. Good work! Liked the last bit!!

Hilarius. :)

LOL, wonderful story, short but still wonderful! Thanks for sharing. ^_^

Lol hmm maggie and ratchet thats funny. So i got say it i really enjoyed this story. You know what would be fun? if you you wrote a story a sequal to this and showed the parents and bumblebees conversation because in all honesty i want to see those popcorn moments. This one had me laughing so i cant even fully imagine how funny that be! Lol i'm 99.9% sure i'd be on the ground rolling so if think about please write a story like that. but hey your the author if you don't want to thats fine. This was a great story and honestly that last part made me laugh i'll be on the look out for more of you storys.

I like it. Very neat the way it all progressed.

I love the plot and the last line! I can so see it happening in my head!

aw very cute fic, can you continue? XD, is funny and romantic and... well, is a intelligent history, with many realistic details.

So, cha ne! ^.~

P.D. Sorry for my bad english ^^u

*laughs more* you really should write more...it's too funny XD

-jaw drops and hands sam some paper towels for the pepsi spill-

there is NO way you can end it there... that's just NOT fair... that is like the movies and their cliffies that are so damn evil!

Really cute!! xD I loved the ending! Awesome job! ;)

Awesome! I laughed my head off. This was great. XD