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sunstarunicorn
2008-09-20
ch 30,
abuseI think Buffy should be a mutant with A) telekinesis or B) teleportation Happy writing
pixie freak
2008-09-15
ch 30,
abuseI CANT WAIT FOR MORE! i love the story really really good! i think buffy should be OPTION A ( i think i might have already said this i f i have ignore the last one cause i cant remember) she should have something that she really cant control cause she likes her slayer abilities and the strength so maybe she should have something that she hates or cant work at will like : seeing dead spirits - that would be kind of ironic or maybe seeing how her loved ones are going to die when she looks them in their eyes or touchs them or something? anyway update as soon as possible and please update on your other story lost and found i really like that one!
AutomaticDistraction
2008-08-29
ch 30, anon.
abuseI think Buffy should be a mutant with a power separate from her slayer abilities; like she can camouflage herself (look like another person and/or animal)
cat
2008-08-11
ch 30, anon.
abusei really like this fic and i've only just found it again after about 5 months lol.
i like the second option but if she is a slayer because she is a mutant wouldnt that make the other slayers all mutants too?
also how does the council fuind out who the slayer is?
Frost Merry Darkness Luver
2008-06-28
ch 30,
abusea and i'm not sure for the power!
DragonStar
2008-06-25
ch 30,
abuseI think I vote for option C. Just being the Slayer is pretty kick ** and special in itself. In the show it seemed that Buffy had some side powers or talents that they just didn't know very much about so you could go down that route for a new power.
DatGirl65
2008-06-23
ch 30,
abuseWhile option C does have some appeal, I think I'd cast my vote on option A...maybe a power that's fire based or something. Anyway, Buffy and Scott are so adorable together and I can't wait for more insite into their relationship, I'd also really enjoy some Angel lovin cuz I'm sure he's probably feelin a little lonely at this point in the story. Hope to see u update soon. Peace xoxo
Buffmeister89
2008-06-23
ch 30, anon.
abuseDecisions, decisions, um I think I'll take option A for 200! LOL Give her some solar beams through her index finger or something...i don't know just make whatever she can do wicked!
Angels-cookie
2008-06-23
ch 30, anon.
abuseTotally for option A)! Slayage would be a touch easier with some solar powered a** kicking! Oh and I totally vote 4 some Buffy/Angel action cuz we've barley had any and I'm feeling a little deprived! lol =)
YoMama101
2008-06-23
ch 30,
abuseOh, definitely option A! Lets give her something wicked...like Oh I don't know...something that would help with slayage! Maybe something like scotts power that has to do with Solar energy or fire or something. ^^Can't wait till the next update! Love the fic by the way ;)
Dark-n-Twisty
2008-06-23
ch 30,
abuseCan I just say how much I love this fic! The relationship betweem Scott and Buffy is so endearing to read, sorta like the bond between Rogue and Logan within the x-men movie-verse. Anywhoo, I'm definately voting for option A), maybe a power that has something to do with fire or electricity like that evil chick from Heroes, there just suggestions by the way. Maybe you could even give her a power that enables her to stay with Angel, (kind of like how Logan could very well be older than dirt, but still pretty much stays a hottie). That last suggestion happens to be my fav, but it's only appealing if you're actually planning on keeping Buffy and Angel together (which I'm crossing my fingers for by the way), otherwise it would seem a little weird for her to stay pretty through the years. Anyways, I think I've rambled enough so I'll just rap this up...Great work, and I hope to read more very soon! =D {SORRY I THINK I PRESSED REVIEW TWICE}

2008-06-23
ch 30, anon.
abuseCan I just say how much I love this fic! The relationship betweem Scott and Buffy is so endearing to read, sorta like the bond between Rogue and Logan within the x-men movie-verse. Anywhoo, I'm definately voting for option A), maybe a power that has something to do with fire or electricity like that evil chick from Heroes, there just suggestions by the way. Maybe you could even give her a power that enables her to stay with Angel, (kind of like how Logan could very well be older than dirt, but still pretty much stays a hottie). That last suggestion happens to be my fav, but it's only appealing if you're actually planning on keeping Buffy and Angel together (which I'm crossing my fingers for by the way), otherwise it would seem a little weird for her to stay pretty through the years. Anyways, I think I've rambled enough so I'll just rap this up...Great work, and I hope to read more very soon! =D
Silver Warrior
2008-06-20
ch 30,
abuseo, what an awesome story. Really, its neat. Personally, I think Buffy should be a mutant, maybe a still-drmane tone. Her power: teleportation. Not like Nightcrawler, but like Blink. If you don't know who that is, she's an elfin mutant (actually, think a Night Elf from World of Warcraft, and I HATE that comparison. It demeans an awesome character) and she can create portals with the aid of small lances. They can either transport meone as far away as the moon (with greater control), or tear them apart on a molecular level. Seriously, that'd be an AWESOME ability for the Slayer to have, thoughy since she doesn't MIND killing, especially demons, it's kinda a godly power to give her. Maybe just the teleportation portals?

And I too though Buffy would have reacted in the way Xavier thought she would and attack the holo-Master.
faeriesinger
2008-06-18
ch 30,
abuseI'm really enjoying your story so far. It's coming along well. As for my choice on the poll...I'd say no mutant powers. The Slayer abilities have already been explained too well, including the fact that another was called when she died, to be explained as a mutant ability. And giving her any other powers would be serious overkill. she already has so many powers and abilities due to being the Slayer that anything else would power mongering. Can't wait to read more!!
Tanydwr
2008-06-18
ch 30,
abuseIt might be interesting to see a genetic basis for the choosing of Slayers and potentials - maybe all of them have the X-gene in some form? It just isn't expressed until the Slayer magic forcibly activates it?

Of course, the X-gene usually doesn't activate until adolescence (although given the age of some of the kids, that doesn't seem to entirely apply), so perhaps Buffy does have an ability of some kind.

It would be interesting to see her with an unusual ability unrelated to Slaying. Maybe she can manipulate electrical signals (like the kid who can change TV channel with a blink, or Micah from Heroes). Or maybe she can fly. Or an illusion ability of some kind. Alternatively, maybe she'll turn out to have the same ability as Scott, but, due to the lack of brain injury, can control it. Or telekinesis, which would draw her closer to Jean. All sorts of fun.

As for Scott being a mutant by coincidence, I believe Buffy herself sums it up perfectly: "There's two things I don't believe in: coincidence, and leprechauns."

I like the way you're going, and I love that you had Buffy and Xander resolve their issues. I am a bit of a Buffy/Xander fan, and a Xander fan full-stop, but even more I love that you've managed to do the whole thing without bashing anyone. I do, however, think you've missed out, since I'm sure Buffy would have called Willow and Xander at the very least, or did that happen off-page?

Maybe Buffy's ability turns out to be an augmentation of her Slayer ones - she gets Logan's healing ability, or her occasional precognitive dreams become a foresight ability. Or maybe there's issues between magic and science...

Keep up the great work, I love it.

Lol, Tanydwr
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