You really captured their friendship in this, as well as keeping them oh-so in-character. And I can so totally imagining them doing crazy and stupid stuff like this! Hayner the leader, and Roxas the follower. I hope you won that contest! 'Cuz this is good stuff! Faved!

-Shana-san

Pence was Pence, and he figured that the TV would be messed up somehow when they returned, so he took as many pictures with the TV as humanly possible. If they didn’t know any better, they would’ve thought the boy wanted to marry it.

Hayner wasn’t against the thought. He thought it would be ‘totally awesome’ to see the half-Pence, half-TV children they could create.

OMG. This is AWESOME. I can't get enough of this fic, I'm serious.

=D
teehee
you had me giggling the whole way through
I need more nonsensical thing to ease my heart...

"So..." Hayner said as he threw the useless remote at their broken TV.

Roxas smiled, "Wanna do it again?"

"You bet!"

I almost fell off my chair laughing so hard! Why can I picture this scenario perfectly? LOL! I think this is awesome!

ZOMG I can so totally see Roxas and Hayner, being the crazy bunch of SUPER BEST FRIENDS they are, doing something crazy like that poking each other with the umbrella and breaking the televsion. It was so cute, and the whole idea just sat with me like it was born out of some sugary starch that made me go sugar high or something. (: it warmed my heart very very much, and I'll have to glomp you for it.
XD grins.
This was a funny, comical, enjoyable read involving two best friends. Like you said, boys will be boys, and Roxas and Hayner on their skateboards totally epitomise that whole slogan, if you know what I mean. XD

you are my hero.


period.

this was amazing.


i loved how you used ur prompt it=beautiful.

i adore this. :D
it's just, wow. perfect friendship. and the last line made me laugh out loud, because really, it's like turning the tables on pence and olette. that last line just gets me, totally.

haha. faving.

Ohmygosh. You think you did a bad job?

NO. NO, THIS ROCKED.

Gosh. You think Olette and Pence would be smarter, and take the TV somewhere else or somethin'. But NO, they leave it with Roxas and Hayner, of all people.

Anyway-Again, this ROCKED. SO cute. :)

>>Jade

Wow, mentally picturing this all... -giggles- silly boys!

Funny fic! I never expected the sea salt would be anyone's undoing.

Half Pence TV children!? wow Hayner, you have a pretty warped mind.

Good job. -high fives-

omg i LOVED this

it was so freaking hilarious and JUST LIKE HAYNER-ROXAS!

and the whole TV being called 'idiot box'... and then they did something idiotic.

Jousting with umbrellas?

Yes.

This is something I need to try.

Great entry, I say. Thanks!

Gosh, I don't even remember how many times times I laughed in-between reading this story. XD

I really liked it since it was a nice change to some stories which I have a overload of dialogue, but still simple enough that it doesn't have "too" much description to make me bored. Great job!^__^