Awesome story. Love it completely.

One of the few fics on ffnet that I've actually gotten into. You've done a great job, congrats!

Good start, but I'm still not feeling in touch with any of the characters yet. I dig the imps portrayal though.

O.o Wow, that was a GREAT story. Truely something. The ONLY thing I didn't like was that it was slightly yaoi, and i'm sure that's what most people had against it. But, with so many words in it, I figured it might be worth a read. I might start reading the next part tomorrow.
DAMN! You did a FINE job! Congradulations.
inferno

Good... Really Good... This is one of the best stories I have read so far... I look forward to it's sequel!
The Grammar was good, the story was interesting, and the only part I didn't like was when you killed off Seiat... Simply because he was my favorite character... But hey, I can' live with it, not like anybody but Tarkasas will notice he's gone...

I dont normally go in for the guy guy stuff but this was well written. I enjoyed this one and look foreward to more of your work.

Whow, wonderfull story, I read it last night, only stopping for until I got to the afterword, I must say this is a very good piece of fanfiction :)

Congrats with the good story.

This is a great story, I loved it. I admit Seiat had a slightly poor section, but overall it was brilliant. I was thinking of making a story and also was just wondering if I could use a few ideas, since they all seem to make perfect sense. If not that's ok. I look forward to the next story. Please hurry!

I really loved this, and I hope we do see more!

GREAT!

Fitting ending, leaving just enough to the readers imagination, which erans a high rating in my book. I actually liked Seiat, and he must have been a hard character to write about, but you managed to do wonderfully and make him an interesting part of the story. Thank you for a most entertaining tale, as I told you before, I am not a Yaoi afficionado but I really enjoyed Tharkassas & Ramasha's romance, you made it tasteful & realistic in the frame of the DK world. I will most certainly read your next DK fic, until next time.

Vick

This chapter had very strong moments, Seiat died as a hero, and it is once again in accord with the spirit of the game, furthermore it was skillfully rendered. The scene between Ramasha & Mortagui surely was intense, it kept me on the edge of my seat. Well done, kudos to the author for a well-woven tale.

Phew! Action packed chapter, loved the battle for it was vividly rendered, and skillfully woven. The bag made of Imp's skin was a great idea, this fic is filled with creativity - Bravo.

Great concept regarding the nature of Imps, and good work on keeping the story consistent in the scope of the game, and your own unique vision of the DK world.

Amazing ending! _ And even though the last chapters hasn't been beta-read. I feel that Seiat purpose has been justified and it fills out the end very nicely. Your drawings of the Keepers themselves helps my imagination a lot .

I can't wait to tsee the sequal. *Prays to the Dark gods* Please write it out, I love your style.

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I thought that torturing Seiat followed the spirit of the story, and also that of the game. Of course, when you are dealing with such issues, it might sound extreme, but IMO it was justified here and consistent with Kaelay's personality. Zannos is an interesting character, I was impressed at how you defined him so well, and in just a scene. Loved his astral projection btw, very aprropriate. Glad to see that Tarkasas & Ramasha's relationship is finally reaching a new level, and growing in a credible manner. That part about the 'mana vessel' was truly creative and clever, as many of the comcepts in this story are I must add. Just back from vacation, and I just saw the updates - I'll R&R asap.

Vick