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Reviews For: That Rebellious American Beauty

person who has no life
2007-07-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like your story. It has potential. However, it could be a bit more, oh, i don't know, luring possibly? It sounds great, but it could be better. Keep up the good work. I like where this is going.
potter is purty
2007-07-13
ch 1, anon.
abusei like
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