Thanks! I love it!! please update more! ! its an... whats the word.. oh yes enthralling story!

nice you also used kristen in harry poter

great chapters luckily I love all the books you wrote about! woot!

Her... no your chapter isn't bad!
i like it alot!
uhm... 2 questions..
1 are sirius and kristen ever gunna end up together?
and is risten a marauder? if so why doesnt she know about the map? and is she an animagus?
AA

aw! so cute!

if they are in first year.. they would be about 11... when most 11 year olds are around im doubting they swear and know what the f word was...
just a thought
AA

Skip ahead to where it gets good

Skip to 5th year

ooh skip to fifth year! Please continue] it@!!

hey,
3 idea to skip to 5th year sounds like the best bit...
would be sad if you would delet the fanfic
please think about it

hahaha I like thazt idea. IT'll be like
Girl1: Do you like my skirt??
Girl2: *eats pastry* ugh no effin way it's ugly as **.

haahhahaha ouch

I have just found your story and read it all at once. It's great! I'm waiting fo the next chapter.

Please update

Please update

Oh! Update soon!