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Emily Waters
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
What a punchline! Yes!
RebeccaRoy
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
Short and intense.
whitehound
2008-03-18 . chapter 1
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HiddenPortrait
2007-09-27 . chapter 1
this idea would be really good expanaded!
Chemical Ghost
2007-07-10 . chapter 1
Interesting...

Question is, what would ghost Albus do? And does that matter?

Quite a bit of power for 100 words, but then, that's what a good drabble is.
tearsofphoenix
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
Yes!
I loved the idea by Red Hen and I love this scene. There are all the words needed and a powerful end:
"I will".

This is such a great possibility... and the gesture by Tom to the sky reminds the scene on the US cover of DH, in this drabble, so... who knows?

Very, very good
duj
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
Good work, but I think you could have fitted the explanation into the drabble if you'd cut out "Did you think to oppose me?" and replaced "the special one" with "the one he'd used that fatal night" or, perhaps, "the one that had felled his friend" . Then you could have added "Priori Incantato" after "commanding the wood".
Mooncat4
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
Wow, how cool is that?!? Nicely done, ma'am. Thank you, Mooncat
cecelle
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
I like that idea -- even if Albus can't do magic in that form, he can still provide a distraction or visual barrier, the way the five figures from Voldemort's wand do, giving Snape time to do his worst with that second wand...
excessivelyperky
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
I _like_ this idea. His ghost would be a lot more powerful than say, Lily or James.

Neat idea!
Catherine Cook
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
And he most certainly will!
Alcina vom Steinsberg
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
Whew - what a hell of a drabble! I had to read it three times and now hope I got it right... intriguing, really intriguing, and what a good idea this is!
Congratultations on this marvellous piece of work, so nicely written!

What puzzles me is whether it's the Snape of "lost and found" or not...
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