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Instabilitas
2008-09-01
ch 8,
abuseI do not recall if I had previously left a review for this story or not. In case of the later, although I am not all too familiar with the Ranma SL, I found this read to be a very enjoyable one. It's a very unexpected, yet believable pairing. I love how you incorporated the events of the Stars manga into Ranma's journey. Very well written and nice job.
ra atva
2008-08-08
ch 8, anon.
abuseWell I read the whole thing, shame on me for I have never read a single manga of sailor moon, but I liked your story. I liked the mature sense you gave to Ranma, I also liked that you did not give any specific of time on his part, I can only clue to how much time has gone by since Nerima. I particularly appreciated the way the relationship between Galaxia and Ranma developes.
I liked the ending, how they meet again. Tis a nice story.
moritynz
2008-07-11
ch 8,
abuseI liked it. A little odd to be sure but a good read none the less.
Violet Shadows
2008-06-16
ch 8,
abuseGood story, a little confusing if you don't know Sailor Moon and there was a descrepancy with the tone around ch 2 i think it was, but it was slight and overall it was a really good piece. As for ways to improve it, next time don't gloss so much over the character development, I understand about wanting to keep the word count down, but if you want to throw out some extreme OOC like Mousse's rapant homosexuality, then you should show it develop. You don't always have to, and your piece was one of the few I've seen that showed it done right, but I think more character development with the side characters would have helped this fic along. Good story, good ending, keep up the good work.
Nearly Indi-cent
2008-06-12
ch 8,
abuseI am happily sighing right now.
That was not only an adorable ending but a stellar fanfiction.
I would have liked more..fluff I spose, however it wouldnt have really worked well with the whole premise.
I have always loved Galaxia so it was a real treat to see her.
I would look forward to the full blown rabbity lemon, so write it already!
duelingchamp
2008-02-03
ch 8,
abusei must say...this story was intense...in a good way. cool fic!
Anonymous
2007-12-08
ch 8, anon.
abuseThat was really great. The only thing I don't like is the first person viewpoint. Though that doesn't really matter.
Just in Jest
2007-11-30
ch 8,
abuseI'll restrict myself this time and won't beat around the bush as the last time.

Great fanfic, which I had (unfortunately) almost forgotten. Nice to see it again in all its strange ways - the meeting, the teacher, the encounters, the nicely wrapped-up ending, open, but not quite resolved. I don't know the Sailor Moon Manga (and actually, don't intend to), but reading this, it actually feels as if told from Ranma's perspective. Flashes, not a whole memory sequence at the beginning, what has happened before he went to get lost, resolved in the flow of the story. I better stop while I still can...

Okay, back to normal levels. It was great to tread this again and I hope you restart writing after reposting your old fanfictions - it definitely would be a pleasure to have new material.
Euphemism
2007-11-20
ch 8,
abuseI'm a little bit confused by everything that's happening here, not having read the Sailor Moon manga. Maybe I will someday. Maybe I would understand the situation better if I knew what Sailor Moon's relationship to Cosmos was. Or what Chaos actually is, and his role in the whole thing.

But in any case, I like this last chapter. The ending is particularly nice, and ties it into the beginning and all. And it kind of reminds me of that other one, where Ranma takes over as Sailor Pluto. I'm hoping you'll repost that one too ^_^
Blue Bragon
2007-11-05
ch 8,
abuseGreat great story thanks for all!!
ranma girl 14
2007-11-03
ch 8,
abuseNice ending, couldn't have been better! ^_^
Rose1948
2007-11-02
ch 8,
abuse::applauds!:: Finding (a) home is always good. Thanks for a very enjoyable story.
jupitersthunder
2007-11-02
ch 8, anon.
abuseThat was a bloody great story. Aw. They finaly found each other again. yay! Happy ending.
hisakatagol
2007-11-02
ch 8,
abusecool story like the ending :)
lighthalk
2007-11-02
ch 8,
abusegrate storry.
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