Good story.

A very well thought of one-shot. :) You should make more KyoHaru fics! :) I'd love to hear Kyoya sing. We could do a duet! hahaha. In my dreams. :P

“How did you find me?” she asks, but she realizes, he’s the Shadow King. He knows where everyone is.

LOL! LOL! LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL!

... I dont really know why i find that funny... but I do!

*continues LOLing*

im so in love with kyoya

It's rather cute. Lovely, really. Great work!

Very cute.

Very cute story, Haruhi is definitely in character, but Kyouya is a little OOC. He probably wouldn't kiss Haruhi out of the blue like that...it would have been better if they had talked for a bit longer and somehow Kyouya has a sudden epiphany and kisses Haruhi or something like that.

And sadly, I have not heard the soundtrack :P

OH JEN! FORGIVE MEH! PLEASE!

Okay, so I've kinda of drifted away from fanfiction for a while, this counts reading it. So, I've lost track of everything, even EUPHORIA! Which, tomorrow, I intend to catch up on. *sigh* I'm even thinking of adding a oneshot to the Ouran category myself, but I donnow.

Now, this? It gave me giggles. I liked it soo much. it was very cute, and very ouran-esque(?).

Anyhow, por tamaki, he probably is worrying! It reminds me of when she got a summer job and he freaked out then.

My favorite line, "she asks, but she realizes, he’s the Shadow King. He knows where everyone is." TEH SHADOW KING!

So, even though I'm not a huge fan of KyoHaru, this was awfully cute, and everyone should read it.

The end - cute !

- Courtney. BAIJEN.

well...im actually a TamaHaru otaku but i love the fic.
especially "The crime is that God created me beautifully"...
hahaha..=p

God forbid they have children...i love that line..

Short & sweet.
It was very lovely.
Good job. :]

x

We all know Kyouya loves Haruhi. If only he was spontaneous... nice stuff! ^_~