Great story! I very much like the way Gandalf talks to Pippin. But you have to be careful: Denethor is only Stewart and there are some points in the story where you call him king

This was such a nice story. I like how Gandalf was comforting Pippin. The encounter with Denethor was good, too.

Very good! Nice characterisation of Pipin and Gandalf.

Hugs,

Sarah x

beautifully written!

Aww I like Elrond's reasons for letting Merry n' Pipin join! That was thoughtful. I agree w/ him.

Great job on this story!

Thanks for haveing Gandlf apologize, poor Pip fool though he is.

Will this be updated?