How about Ichigo runs into Kenpachi and they finally have that damned fight? I want to see Kenpachi gets his butt whooped by Ichigo's Bankai.

I'll write it, if you want.

This is a good start! I wonder what will happen next! :)

It was an interesting start to something that had a lot of potential. It is too bad that you don't ever intend to finish it. Maybe you could find someone else who has an that branches off of this or something. Either way, the writing was certainly pretty good and I wish you luck with your other fics.

I think that conversation went a little too smoothly, but whatever.

I like it. I will for sure keep reading this.

It was really good, the story moved pretty fast. Something I would suggest for you to do, becuase it is nice to readers like me, is to put in more commas. Other than that, spelling and knowledge of bleach is great! I will definatly read more!

it is fine i hope you save your muse soon. until then i will have to read you other fics :)

don't worry about it! i konw how hard it is, since i had a story and it turned out wrong so i had to delete it. good luck with the american student though. if you need help, just ask. i'll be more than glad to help you if i can. :)

FINISH THE BOOK! it was just getting god, heres a hint, pairings help, put some vasto lordes in there an an angry byakuya because of ichruki

no pairings, come on, ichiruki!

aww i wont kill u ... then itd never get finished ;P ... i understand im having somewhat of the same problem with mine!

aw ... i will miss the frequesnt updates but thats ok :) we all need a break :p newho, nice chapter! cant wait til u update again! have fun on ur trip and good reading :)

ook... I reviewed...
Now... NEXT CHAPTER PLZ!

You need pockY? here. -gives ShinigamiFangirl 20 boxes of pocky-
Caffeine? here. -gives her a whole box of redbull and 20 grams of crack (lol)-

there. Now you have it. now... update!

its ok if there arent ne pairings. maybe thats better than trying to develop pairings yeah? newho i liked the chapter as usual. and hopefully youll get to update before the release of the harry potter book :) if not, it ok. ur the writer n u write at ur dispense :) BYE!

This story has potential to be good. Needs some steam to it. I know u dont want parings, but mabey throw in some new charecters. Some sexuak inuendo wont hurt it. Make Soul SOciety look like a fun place. EX: Lower squad members throw a party. Ichigo and someoone do Bankai Tranning. There is gonna be a special mission to Hueco Mundo to kill a deadly Hollow. Trun Ichigo into a ninjia, there are lots of things were u can take this story. Try it.