totally diff twist - good stuff

i think you have the perfect grasp of morelli's personallity great story.

How very sad that Joe and Steph's marriage came to that, and the pain she went through, but it shows the strength of character she had to help him get better. I'm glad you had him wake up in the end, and love her enough to want the best for her.

Great story.
Mag

I love this story. It's so sad and yet so good. Thanks for writing it. :)

I was trolling for angst and stumbled across this little gem! I know it's an oldie but I found myself wishing you had turned it into a short chapter series that showed Ranger bringing Steph out of her abused little shell. Well done!

This was a tough read. Although a devout Babe I really like Joe, and domestic violence is a tough one. I loved the way you handled it, I loved the way Steph stuck by Joe and helped him through detox and I loved the way Joe gave her up so Ranger could rekindle the lost light in her eyes.

Well done Babe.

Ruth

i like it, but the first line of the lyrics, everytime arent in bold.. im not sure if you ment this though! lol, i really like this story, and im glad Morelli made the right choice!

Oh, what a heartbreaker! Of course I'm glad she had Ranger to save her, but my heart does break a little that Joe had it in him to push her away to save her. Well done. Not the Joe I fell in love with in the early books, but he did have a saving grace in the end, didn't he? I love all your work, keep it up!

May have had a tear trying to escape my eye at the end. It didn't surprise me that she got him sober but then to stay? It worked well tho cos we got to get the half decent guy Morelli is to show through. And of course I'm a babe so I know Ranger took her home and ravished the spirit right back into her. Can't say i'd want to read it time and again, but it was definately well done!

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That was really beautiful. Made my eyes water... just a little. I've always sung along to this song on the radio... thinking that the words were powerful--yet catchy... but now this adds a whole new dimension.

c98


BTW, Your formatting is a little off on the song lyrics.

wow... angsty alright. but beautifully written

this is you a "little" angsty? lol

Nope, didn't like it. First of all, Steph wouldn't stand for damestic violence, second, even if Ranger was out of town, the Mary men wouldn't stand for it, and third, I just hate Joe. LOL

Sad but well written.