continue!

I'm sure my review is going pale in comparison to some of the others I'm certain you've received. So, I'm going to keep this sort and simple. :)

This story was beautiful. Absolutely amazing. The depth of emotion you're able to portray is breathtaking and easy to immerse in, and you have a wonderful talent for writing.

I came to tears at times and by the end of the story I was grinning like a love-struck fool. The positive emotion you left this story on was palpable and I felt as happy as Sam and Bee did. It's a wonderful story, and I really love how you've left yourself up for a sequel, especially. In fact, I think I'm going to go read that next!

this was a great story and i cant wait to read the rest. it was a pain to find though! i had to find it through someones favorites...which, while awesome, is kinda D:<, you know? anyway

the story was interesting, the drama was sincere, the angst was appropriate, and the characters werent terribly ooc, which i really approved of.

im hoping that in ignition there will be something more about the allspark, but hey, a coffee shop in europe seems like a fun place to start. just hope megatron gets his act together and bonds with starscream...can we say decaf, anyone? and maybe it will help him...chill out? cause i know if i got as much spanktime as starscream would provide, id be too mellow to go kill autobots xD.

aww poor starscream. his bonded was screaming mimi crazy D:

hahahahaha. omg you used my life, kinda! i was stationed on the uss blue ridge, which was part of the uss kitty hawk team (seriously) when we went out on exercises. we were based out of yokosuka, japan. i remember going to austrailia and i think we actually might have had a joint exercise while there...keep in mind this was like...2003 or 04 i think, and after so many trips in the ocean they all kind of seem the same so i could be wrong. on the upside i can say that it was a lot of fun once we got into townsville. dang kitty got to go to sydney i think and go to that awesome zoo. i dont remember giving intel on any f-22s though...

so far this story is interesting. the plot is different and i like the angst.

Yea! A happy ending. I think. I'm on my way to read the sequel!

hey, i just wanted to you to know that your stuff is so awesome that im studying it for my sam/bee story. one of my readers recommended reading your stuff and i am not disappointed at all.

awesome work

Ah, one of my first stories about this pairing. And man, oh man did I love every moment. I usually get bored easily with long descriptions; good or not. But this was just a fantastic breath of fresh air. Every time my usually tripper happy "That's OOC" notions came they were immediately shot down by a "...but they would, wouldn't they?" you've strung together a wonderful story. And I can't stress enough at how much I adored your Starscream. Dude, that bot is one tough cookie and you can't help but love him. I found that although he didn't have many scenes in the movie, the off distant shots of him just radiated a short of other worldly awe, they showed his danger factor as well as his personality in a few shots and, I have you say, you translated that amazingly into words. Every line with Starscream just oozed him, if that makes sense xD;

But yeah, love the interaction and relationship between Sam and Bumblebee. I also highly appreciated the bit about Google Earth. Now, this is in no way a complaint but I'm more of a light-hearted reader and too much drama has me taring my hair out. So a dash of humor, no matter how small was a joy. But as I said, no complaints here, you have such a way with imagery and words that you can throw in heart wrenching angst and it's so good you couldn't stop reading. It's nice to finish a story too, so I must applaud you for finishing this, it's heartbreaking how many great stories get abandoned.

Anyway, I'm off to read the sequel, keep up the awesome work!

Wow!

I really enjoyed this story. It was very different!

The DomSub thing FREAKED me OUT though. :D I kept reading because I wanted to know how the story ended, but I'm a snarly defender of equality in relationships (Thanks in part to some hardcore fanfic writers who are against it) so that's why the reaction was so strong.

I was relieved greatly to see that it had greatly lessened, although I admit to a little disgust that any part of it still remains. I'm rearranging my brain right now to balance it out with Bumblebee being so focused on protecting and providing for Sam everything he possibly can, without limits so long as its safe for Sam.

There, that's better!

Great story! I'm an Aussie too, so it was nice to see them end up down here. I appreciated Australia a lot more after I visited other countries. Sure, we're insulated and a big chunk of us are unfortunately bigoted against some other bunch of people, but we're also so much more relaxed, given to generosity and friendship.

Wow is right. I wish I could've discovered this fic sooner for the chance to review on each chapter, like some sort of adventure or something. Anyway, this was fabulous. I'm not feeling particularly wordy right now, but I'll give a good review a shot.

Your words. They are perfect. The way you describe things is indescribable, ironically enough. Your writing style has a magical, emotional, raw feeling to it that I'm addicted to now.

And your Bee? Wow. His personality is spot on, really. The interactions between him and Sam are very endearing and I'm just in love with the way you handle their chemistry.

This doesn't have much to do with anything, but I really enjoyed your comments at the beginning/end of each chapter. They were quite entertaining lol.

I think that's all I have to say for now but if I remember something I've forgotten, I'll be sure to tell you. Fantastic story, I'll definitely be reading the sequel!

Oh wow! I just found this and it is absolutely beautiful! SamXBee is just so awesomely cute it just makes my head explode!

This was the most amazing story I've had the pleasure of reading. You had my emotions screaming and fighting with each step of the way and now that it's over I feel exhuasted! In the best of all possible ways. ^^ I literally couldn't put it down. I've spent hours glued to my computer screen from the first moment I looked up the story that someone else had mentioned here on FFN. Honestly, I don't see how anything I read in this spectrum of fiction will ever manage to compare in the slightest. Despite there being a sequel I'm afraid I'll have to wait at least a few more hours before I can claim a hint of a reasonable hour to continue reading this epic. ^^

That was beyond intense. I don't even know if I understood all that just happened, but it was friggin' intense nevertheless.

Great story, and I'm pleased with the ending but still excited for the sequel. Chilling introduction, by the way. It gave me the shivers.

Please direct me to page 6. I love me some Barricade/Bee/Sam action.

Seriously, love this fic though. It made me cry. You don't know me, but I don't normally cry. Give yourself a pat on the back, you special author, you.