I enjoyed it especially the words used to describe Mugen and Jin when they fight.

The only part of this page that I read that I didnt like was the part you wrote personaly about not liking this work. You hold a greta concept of Mugens' charictor and his relationship with Jin. Your personal personification experiance with Mugen in this story gave me more depth and understanding of episodes that, before, were a little unclear to me. I am glad to have read this and hope to read more spometime!

^_^ I like it. I don't know why, but it is kind of true...
Haha, maybe Mugen really is kind of jealous of Jin!

I thought that this summed up Mugen perfectly. His thoughts and jealously seem to fit him perfectly well too. It just somehow works. I loved the ending where you just used single words to describe them. It flowed perfectly.
I guess what I'm trying to say is--I loved it!

Your story is as full of grace as its subject matter :]

- E.D.

...Grace? Recklessness?...Nice!

It was pretty good.. keepin the flow :)

Amazing.

You really out did yourself this time, and I can't believe you didn't think much of it. This short poetic narrative sums up a side of Mugen that is rarley seen in the world of Samurai Champloo. We can see at times in the show when he rolls his eyes at the stoic samurai, and there are times when he chooses to ignore him too. If you ask me he does this because he wishes that he could be collected and speak with such lucidity. However; everyone's gotta love the crazy boy Mugen even if he is just a vulgar punk.

I'm sorry I haven't gotten around to publishing my Sam Cham fic yet. I've been working like crazy! This summer and it is diffuclt to find the freakin time.

Keep up the kickin work!