Reviews for The Butcher and Baker and Candlestick Maker

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Kessie 2008-08-28 ch 1, anon.	abuse0_0 -finally breathes- DAYUM GIRL...I think girl...Kay is a girl name right? ANYWAY, i love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. Especially the repition of the last line of a section as the first line of the next. And the same words of Dream!Leo. Please update. :D?
Koriat Cyredanthem 2008-08-25 ch 1,	abuseVery nice, Kay the Cricketed! A very suspenseful story. I really hope you continue this as soon as possible; it's been almost a full year since this was updated. The descriptions are incredible. One of your best stories, I believe, if not the best. At least of your TMNT stories; I haven't read the others. ^__^
Sassyblondexoxo 2008-08-02 ch 1,	abuseThere's a flare of brightness. Kay opens her eyes. Sassy stands before her, shrouded in shadow. "Make sure that the light's are out, or else they'll see you." "What?" Kay asks, squinting. "I don't understand." "When you write the next chapter to this story. Do it in the dark. That way everything will stay horrifically creepy, and no one will be able to see you and drag you back into the real world. You can sit and write fanfiction forever." "But it's been so long," Kay replies, confusion overcoming her face. "I'm not sure what to write for the next chapter..." "You don't remember? Kay, you must remember." Or else I'll kick YOUR **! This story is too good to abandon! LOL, love you Kay.
waywardlurker 2008-07-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh wow this was a very awesome read. creeped the heck out of me. i do hope you plan on continuing because im dying to know what the heck is going on!
SilentMyriad 2008-04-26 ch 1,	abuseI'm pretty sure I forgot to breathe at some point reading this. ::gasps for air:: I love your style of writing - back and forth between the two worlds with those overlapping sentences. I think you lead the reader through Raphael's disorientation and frustration beautifully. One sentence though - I wasn't sure if I wasn't supposed to understand it or not, but it didn't quite seem right. Leo, towards the end of the chapter says "How can you say something one minute, then completely another the first?” I would have got 'another the next', but using 'first' plays strange things with my concept of time. Anyway, I love the story!
Tatsumaki-sama 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseMan, that was simply amazing. Raph and Leo were incredible and I can really feel their anger, frustration, fear and confusion radiating from them. Dream Leo and Dream Don certainly gave me the creeps and makes me wonder, what happened (or will happen) to Don and what does it have to do with Mikey's laughter and the candle? The way you flowed from the real world to the dream world is absolutely stunning and I loved every bit of this wonderful story. I hope you update soon. //“Now go. And don’t let them kill Don, Raph, that’s where it starts and ends. Don’t let Mikey laugh and don’t let the candle go out, but most of all, don‘t let them kill Donny.”// I simply loved the repetition of Dream Leo repeating his lines again and again until it drives Raph insane. And it's driving me insane with questions too. ^^
Lil Ole Me 97 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseHaha, well... I'm completely confused, congratz! Honestly don't have any clue whatsoever... Can't wait until ya update! Oh, I do wonder how it'll work out!
Random Clone 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseOh. My. Goodness. This fic is amazing. You had me at the edge of my seat the entire time! I really enjoy your writing style; it adds a lot to the suspense. :) I'm eagerly awaiting an update!
JennaLouise 2007-12-15 ch 1,	abuseDear Kay My Christmas wish is for an update to The Butcher and Baker and Candlestick Maker. Without a doubt it is the best work of fiction I have ever read (and this statement is not exclusive to fan fic) and I would so love to read more! Jenna
a-big-apple 2007-12-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh, another one that requires a comment! I want to urge you on into further chapters, this is really fascinating and frightening! I'm eager to see how it continues.
Becky Murakawa 2007-09-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. I love the atmosphere of this story--sort of apocolyptic, very exciting, and at the same time, terribly sad. I'm really getting into the "dream mystery", and rooting for Raph (who, by the way, you write WONDERFULLY). This is, no exaggeration, my new favorite fanfic EVER, and I really, really hope you plan to continue this--I'm absolutely intrigued.
imacrackakindagurl 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseplease please please please please write tha next chap soon! this is like...one of tha BEST stories off fanfic i'v ever read n believe mi, i've been around for awhile. so please finish tha next soon!
Courk 2007-08-25 ch 1,	abuseI only had time to read half the chapter now, but I had to comment on it. “Now go. And don’t let them kill Don, Raph, that’s where it starts and ends. Don’t let Mikey laugh and don’t let the candle go out, but most of all, don‘t let them kill Donny.” That sent chills down my spine the first time. Heck, even the subsequent times are creepy. This story is awesome. I love not knowing what's going on. I can't wait until I can finish this chapter, and then wait for the second chapter. I can just tell the wait will be torture. :-)
LadyDragonRain 2007-08-19 ch 1,	abuseWow that was just...intense. Very good, amazingly good. Your characterization of Raph and the others is quite good..but especially Raph. Please update soon! :o)
Dawn 2007-08-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseHi. I just discovered this site and all the stories (just figured out that "complete" tag too). I am completely hooked by this one. I like _need_ to know what happens next. Please, please I ask you to post more. I love how the dream/real world overlapped by a sentence. I think that perfectly shows how everything is becoming blurred ... am I waking ... am I sleeping? Thank you for sharing your stories. -Dawn

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