Oh my god. You are one of my favorite authors in this fandom, and this was- GOD. How you did it will never cease to wonder me.

*purrs*
*rubs against you like cat*
*re-reads fic*
*purrs again*

MM-MM-F'N FANTASTIC! It's 'Bee and it's 'Hide and it's beautiful!

*drools a bit*
*gives cookies*

HA! I almost thought there was seriously going to be a stripping Autobot. In fact, I read this out of sheer crack-i-ness. Almost didn't (it even lost eenie-meenie-miney-moe), but then I was like, BUT Bumblebee is a stripper. A S-T-R-I-P-P-E-R!

Nice.

(lol, new category - StripFiction!)

Erm Ok. It's a little odd and I like the other pairings to but it's pretty good and as you said cracktastic ^^

Wow...a crackfic that's deep. I didn't think it was possible but you have done it well.

I like how you explained this relationship, and getting Bee to join the Autobots, pretty believeble for crack.

I don't have much to say at the moment.

-A crappy reviewer

honestly, i really cant understand how you pulled this off but damn did it work!

..AHAHHAHAHAHA I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!


>.>

I wasn't going to read this because I was afraid it was going to be one of those. I was actually surprised because this is one of those things that could actually make SENSE. Wow. I like the soul to soul thing, its more erotic that way. And, what I can best described as, more meaningful. Kinda like true love?

You get props for this and originality. And thats saying alot since I usually dress down people...

Spark to Spark mating. Hmm, it felt more like soul to soul. Very original. I didn't want to read this at first, but I am glad I did. Well done.

This was an excellent piece. Touching and erotic without being obvious. It conveyed exceptionally well,that certain anguish in your Iron Hide at having to ask Bee to do this, truly understanding, as only a soldier can, which would be worse, knowing one is inevitable. Very well done.

I don't know what to say. This was...interesting. I love seeing a softer side of Ironhide. And well, how can anyone resist Bumblebee the stripper *cackle* I so can't wait to read the rest of your stuff.

*resisting urgue to squeal at angsty cuteness* That would explain ALOT about Bumblebee's personality. Me likey very much.

This was good... I'd never have thought someone could pull him off as a stripper though... you amaze me yet again Kurumi!

It was sweet how Ironhide did it all to keep Bee safe... nice!

Interesting story.

You took a very wonderful risk and exploration with this fiction. Excellent work!

My first thoughts upon seeing the fiction and description was curiosity (charged mostly by "You You You" where Bee talks to Sam about his past with Ironhide. I wasn't sure what to expect considering this Bee would have to be infinitely younger by his words in "You..." and there would be more exploration as to what life could have been like on Cybertron at the time of the fiction.

So I opened the story and began to read. My initial thoughts on it were mixed and I had to sit and think on it a little. Would Bee have been this way? Could the Bee you've written about from the movieverse have been this Bee? I decided after some thought that yes, I could see it. He's young, full of life, and hasn't been jaded by a lot of the worlds opinions on how he should live.

Then I turned to Ironhide. So very little is said of and about him in the movie, I can see how much fun you can have with the character. I did find him believable though appreciated how he had taken so much concern for Bee's safety. The depth of writing for Ironhide's thought process was wonderful and enlightening.

Reading through, I could easily see and believe how Bee could end up with Prime and his small band headed to Earth. The bond also between Ironhide and Bee seems very real and true and I enjoyed it more than I thought.

Again, the imagery was of the coupling was fantastic. Actually! I found this an even better written picture of the coupling than how you wrote it in "You..." Albeit, Bee is larger than Sam, getting a better idea of the meshing of Sparks added quite a bit and when I went and reread "You..." it enhanced that moment as well.

I think the only part I wish I had seen more into was what led Bee into deciding to join Ironhide and Prime in the fight.

This fiction has my mind whirling! Excellent writing once more and thank you again for sharing! As always I look forward to reading your work!