Awesome Story Keep up the Great work :)

Wow, nice chapter!

So that's hoe Sera changes... I always wondered that.

The girls are making friends, with Peach, even though she's being held captive. I wonder what Mario will think when he comes to rescue her...

Well, see ya!

WRITE MORE PLX. -hinthintnudgenudge- :D

Ciao!

~Kit Quizmo

I really like this story (like my other favs.).

No offence, but if I were Bowser, I'd take consideration (and actually think) about letting three human girls take a hostage to a guest room; it just seems so... suspicious.

Hey, I was just wonderin'. Have you read MY Mario story? Well, I have two, but I mean my Mario adventure story. It's simaler to yours (except it has two boys).

Well, see ya! Man, that was a long review...

Cool, Peach is coming! Well, she might depending on how Mario saves her. And good luck with this and your other stories! Can't wait for more!

OHNOEZ, WHAT SHALL HAPPEN? XD

Keep writin', 'K? :3

~Kit Quizmo (PH33R MY N3W NICKN4M3! X3)

LYK OMG A PLOT THINGY! :D

Hoorah

What the? Who are "Sam, Ivy, & Sera"?!

...This was a good chapter, so keep writing or I'll sic...

Dialga: -DragonClaw-

Kitayl: -.-;

Nice

Neat

Cool

A neat start.

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X3

Keep writing or I'll force Dialga to eat your brains.

Dio: My name is DIO! -twitch-