I LOVED IT! PLEASE MAKE MORE!

I really, really, really love it. It's so compelling and intriguing; I'm dying to know more about it but also think that would ruin the idea. I love the idea of trying to get Harley back, even if it just to teach her she can't leave him.

You are truely amazing.

Love it. I don't think it's incomplete just...some things kind of end wherever they feel like.

This one felt like here. Here is a good place to be.

I dont know, sometimes I prefer uncheerful Harley. Makes her see more human...If shes written well, which she is here.
In my opinion, I think you could have ended it on:

“Keep your ** eyes open while I do it or believe me I’ll give you a real reason to scream after”. (awesome one-liner by the way)

The last section just feels different from the rest for some reason.

Still, I love the story, adore your brand of abstraction. *fave*

Wow. Even I got lost in this... xD lol
It's a great story though.


[by the by, "Always and Never" is an amazing song by the Nekromantix]

I really like the disjointedness and incompleteness of this one. It captures the insanity of those two. The biting tongue scene was sexy. man! man. purrs.

hot

quite existential at the end there

Dark and twisted. I love it.