|Reviews for Fair Game|
| StarryFaith 2/3/08 . chapter 11
Thats soo sweet. Loved your fic.
| jashaw 1/31/08 . chapter 11
LOVED this story! I still wish you would write a futuristic one where the girls got to meet Bella. I'd love to hear your take on their take of their Edward and the puny little human girl!
| jerseygirl12247 1/7/08 . chapter 11
This is the best fanfic I've evre read. Amazing.
| zebrasdancing 1/6/08 . chapter 11
love the story. bvery interesting!
| Patrick-Henry 12/31/07 . chapter 11
Very nice, this was fun to read. I really liked the plot and how you made the characters- very original. Great writing, too. Awesome!
| PurpleMatter 12/22/07 . chapter 11
I was a bit speechless after reading this story. It also inspired me to go out and read everything you've written, and all I can say is BRAVO!
| LittleMissJessicaLynn 10/25/07 . chapter 11
Wow, you made me fall in love with Edward all over again. Thank you.
| S.B. Kisses 10/19/07 . chapter 11
I've always wondered how Edward's life was like before Bella and this was a wonderfully written glimpse!
Keep up the fabulous work!
| starlightwilight 9/28/07 . chapter 11
Wow, this was relly good! I loved the way you ended it!
| k1ndredsp1r1t 9/27/07 . chapter 11
This is great. I hope you have more.
| ameliefoy 9/23/07 . chapter 11
Awesome! I loved this! This was one of my friend's favorites. I don't usually read Twilight fanfiction, but this is very good, and I'll be definitely reading more of your fics soon!
| amoredward 9/3/07 . chapter 11
Oh wow! I love how you switched to this point in time. So so good!
I'm still sad, though, that the story has ended. I believe, though, that there was a sequel (or something equivalent) in your profile? I'll have to check that out...)
But wow. This was seriously so good that I can't believe it! You took the Denali characters and gave them such interesting personalities! I feel like this is how they should be in the actual Twilight-verse!
Overall, amazing job. You have such a great talent! Thanks for writing this!
| amoredward 9/3/07 . chapter 10
Ooh, I love this one so much! Maybe the most, even, of all the chapters so far!
I forgot to mention it in the last review, but I love how you have the...what's the word I'm looking for? You make little ironic references to Edward thinking that he'll always be alone, and that no teenage girl could ever be the death of him. So funny!
Great! I'm almost reluctant to read the last chapter, because it is just so good, but I don't have any restraint! Ta ta!
| amoredward 9/3/07 . chapter 9
Oh gosh. So many good parts that I won't begin to quote them. Umm...well I'm going to read the next chapter! It's just too good to resist!
Fabulous work, by the way!
| amoredward 9/3/07 . chapter 8
Oh, the anticipation of something happening! It is hard to stop and review!
But this might be one of my favorite lines from all fanfiction:
"She'd corrupted me — I was seeing innuendos everywhere."
*laughing hysterically* So so good!
And also when Edward is thinking "Focus" that was very funny. I love how you write this-Edward trying to resist any physical temptation. If I was in a reverse situation (meaning a guy like Edward was going after me) I wouldn't have enough self-control to last me five minutes!
I'm off to read more! Yay!