Very beautiful poem, you write extremly well. ^_^ I was wondering, are you a fan of Demando/Saphir as a yaoi couple?

nice work

I'de just like to say...I LOVE THIS ^_^ and if you can...could you make more poems and stuff like this? ^_^

I'm a huge fan of your work but what I really admire is how well read your are. When you wrote, " He inhaled her scent but eventually he had to exhale out the pieces of her that was in himself but was not him", I was instantly reminded of Neruda's sonnet 17. I'm sure you know what line I'm talking about. Anyway, you're a fantastic writer, please keep up the good work. I enjoyed this drabble as much as I've enjoyed everything else you've written.

Again, gorgeous piece.

The last line was beautiful, very much in keping with a wondering and tortured heart. You made Diamond not a demented man obssesed with Usagi/Serenity, but a man who fell in love too hard, too fast to an ideal, as well as the woman.

Good work.

I realy love this.

Hugs!
C.S.