Ahh. what a place to stop! i love this story. i have to say it's the best blade fic i've ever read. i love it. i started reading it yesterday and i couldn't stop. i was reading it until like 3 in the morning because i didn't want to stop reading it was so good. there is the issue of using an online translator a little bit but...hey. i still love it. i hope you keep writing. i can't wait for the next chapter. i'm ever so curious about this female vampire that the little detective is working for. please update soon.

I like it. It's nice to see that you've been updating this story for so long despite a lack of reviewers... Don't let it get you down, just remember there are many who are reading and enjoying.

This story is sort of AWESOME! I like the way you take the time to set up the relationship between King and Dayne. Also, I love Temoc, and the new NightStalkers (Faye's hair is super cool). Duque is okay, except I really want to slap him for being such an overbearing jackass. I mean REALLY. For a while I wanted to slap Dayne too, for her irritatingly persistent denial, but she's over that now, so it's okay.

There are two things that kind of bother me. Firstly, there are a lot of characters. It can be a little difficult to keep track of who's who, and some of the characters simply don't get developed very much. This mostly bothered me when the guys were camping. Lot of dudes.

Secondly, the Spanish. I think it's awesome to include it, except I don't speak (I'm a Francophone myself). Sometimes I worry that I'm missing something, but the effort to get online translators is a little too much (especially since I've been reading this story on my phone). Perhaps you could offer translations at the end of the chapter? Not a huge issue, though.

Altogether a great story! Keep it up. :)

hi! i'm really suprised this story doesn't have many reviews this is the best story i've read so far! please updat very very soon i can't wait to see what happens next!

Story still going strong. Thanks for the update.

WOW! I like this chapter, I'm going to go back and read the others too, but seeing as I do most things backwards this story should be no exception. I love it, its funny, its cute, its sweet. You're writing it so well too. Okay I'll stop gushing about it now, but not before saying its awesome.

The fic I just started writing is somewhat similar, a solid brother/sister/king situation, but much different because Elle much more of a sissy than Danye, and King is oblivious to her adoration. Danye is such a character, I love her. Keep up the good work!

I'd love to know what you think of my fic too.

Thanks for the update. Story's going great, can't wait to read more. BTW- love Dayne/King romance.

I love this story.

You have an excellent writing style, your characters are interesting, and the pacing is spot on. You have real talent and I hope you'll see this story to completion.

i love the story! It's the best! I can't wait for the next chapter!

So I haven't reviewed in a while and I'm sorry for that but I haven't been keeping up the reading. Anyways I loved everything in these last few chapters. Like I said before I love abby/king interactiony stuff so it's been awesome. I know it's frustrating to continue stories, but you've got something really good here! Please upload more. I know I may not be 10 people reviewing, but I would love to read more regardless of how other people feel.

Good Luck!

LW

Great story so far, i like how you've kept King and Abby to their personas in the movie. For an additional prank, maybe have the good ol' Bucket of randomness fall down when someone opens the door. I used latex paint, and got my sister to activate it and she was drenched with paint, and it wouldn't come out of her clothes. Anyways, good story.

This looks good.

I like how this story is going. I get the feeling that Abby may be getting a little reckless in the future. I'm a sap for a King/Abby thing, but I can see why King would be attracted to Dayne. I also like that you created an entirely new NightStalkers universe in a way.

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!

Can't wait for more!

It's cool. The mother-son relationship is well-written, and I would look forward to reading more.