FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| TheRiz 2008-05-23 ch 19, anon. | abuseStory still going strong. Thanks for the update. |
| You Want To Read It 2008-05-15 ch 17,  | abuseWOW! I like this chapter, I'm going to go back and read the others too, but seeing as I do most things backwards this story should be no exception. I love it, its funny, its cute, its sweet. You're writing it so well too. Okay I'll stop gushing about it now, but not before saying its awesome. The fic I just started writing is somewhat similar, a solid brother/sister/king situation, but much different because Elle much more of a sissy than Danye, and King is oblivious to her adoration. Danye is such a character, I love her. Keep up the good work! I'd love to know what you think of my fic too. |
| TheRiz 2008-05-15 ch 17, anon. | abuseThanks for the update. Story's going great, can't wait to read more. BTW- love Dayne/King romance. |
| TheRiz 2008-05-14 ch 15, anon. | abuseI love this story. You have an excellent writing style, your characters are interesting, and the pacing is spot on. You have real talent and I hope you'll see this story to completion. |
| iccy 2008-03-23 ch 11, | abusei love the story! It's the best! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Liz Wyatt 2008-02-08 ch 11, | abuseSo I haven't reviewed in a while and I'm sorry for that but I haven't been keeping up the reading. Anyways I loved everything in these last few chapters. Like I said before I love abby/king interactiony stuff so it's been awesome. I know it's frustrating to continue stories, but you've got something really good here! Please upload more. I know I may not be 10 people reviewing, but I would love to read more regardless of how other people feel. Good Luck! LW |
| Cran Kuris 2007-11-05 ch 10, | abuseGreat story so far, i like how you've kept King and Abby to their personas in the movie. For an additional prank, maybe have the good ol' Bucket of randomness fall down when someone opens the door. I used latex paint, and got my sister to activate it and she was drenched with paint, and it wouldn't come out of her clothes. Anyways, good story. |
| Eerie Iri 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThis looks good. |
| Liz Wyatt 2007-08-25 ch 7, | abuseI like how this story is going. I get the feeling that Abby may be getting a little reckless in the future. I'm a sap for a King/Abby thing, but I can see why King would be attracted to Dayne. I also like that you created an entirely new NightStalkers universe in a way. Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading! Can't wait for more! |
| Threnody Shepherd 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseIt's cool. The mother-son relationship is well-written, and I would look forward to reading more. |