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Someone aka Me
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
Wow. I love it!
@(*_*)@
xoxocullenluverxoxo
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
aww this was really sad! i always wondered about it but didnt it say that he imprinted on her? so then why did he have to walk away? i thot a soon as he saw her it would have been imprint...at least thats wat happened to everyone else?
WhiteLotus95
2009-02-08 . chapter 1
Interesting and very well written. I'm confused, though - wasn't Leah Sam's first love?
.BleedingxHearts.
2008-11-16 . chapter 1
Aw! cute and sad and frustrating at the same time.
Fragile Little Human
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
This is great... but "the only girl I've ever cared about'? What about Leah? And in this story, has Sam already imprinted on Emily?
Allegra.Jane.Alec
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
So, like many other reviews have already accurately pointed out, Sam was Leah's boyfriend while he phased for the first time and he had not met Emily until after he changed and she came to visit Leah (who is her second cousin or something), so it doesn't make sense when he mentions their baby pictures and the marrying proposal. That's all, apart from that, it was very well writen, just like all of your stories! (by the way, I've read them all... some of my homework has been very affected by that, but I don't regret it a bit!)
a step into the Light
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
aww! that was so sad! i liked it
iquitfanfic
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
um...emily was the one he imprinted on [and thus, he could tell everything to her]..leah was his girlfriend before the werewolf stuff..[the one he couldn't tell anything to]
so..um..this doesn't make any sense.
he DID attack emily, but it was because they were talking about leah, not about him not being able to tell her stuff [which he COULD, in fact, tell her]
so..it's really well written, but you have to get your facts straight...
Mrs Black 84
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
Aw I liked it very nicely written I liked that it was descriptive and well it played all out in my head i totally pictured the whole thing!! Great!
awfullynormal
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
Aside from the fact that Sam was actually with Leah and then imprinted on Emily, this was really good! I think you captured what Sam was going through perfectly- his feelings and all were spot on. Great job!
-iluvjasper @>-->-
ForeverIndebted
2008-05-16 . chapter 1
Umm...
You know that Emily met when Leah (who he was in love with at the time) brought Emily from...somewhere. They weren't friends from when they were babies like Jacob and Bella...well...kind of Jacob and Bella...
But you get my point, right?
Sam imprinted on Emily when she came to visit, all by Leah's doing.
Twilightxfanatic21
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
i like it!
Looking for Alaska
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
woah.
you made me so confuzzled! DX
sam was with leah before. so i was reading this and i was like, okay, why is she starting here? but then i realized that you werent talking about leah, but about emily and yeah. you made me conffused.
but watevez.
that was really good.
not as good as edward.
but i still loved it none the less.
:]
HeswamtoFrance
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
you captured their emotions very well. marvolous story!
george
mischieflover
2007-12-11 . chapter 1
oh, that was so sad! poor sam, he wasn't one of my favorites, but now i feel bad for him...
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