OMG O.O i loved the Ponyboy/Johnny & Sodapop/Ponyboy chapters! i love Ponyboy slash, so can you make a chapters that have Pony with other members of the gang, like Steve, Twobit, or Darry? Thatd be AWESOM! =)

OMG I LOVE U FOR WRIRING THIS! lol XD I LOVE SODAXPONY!^^ Its my fav couple ever! ok incest is when someone loves someone in their family more than they should, or when 2 people from the same family do sexual stuff together. So ya since Soda & Pony are brothers, this chapter is definatly incest.

you, you seriously don't know what incest is?! Ok yeah what you got on google is probably a BIG hint on what you just wrote. And considering all off which you just wrote I don't think anyone who still has the brain cells left to read on or has overdosed on brain bleach yet, are now sitting around waiting for some good het scenes and all the others who had started reading this storey in hope of some het sex after 3 slash scenea are still lurking around. Oh and I can see pictures of an angrey smokey the bear and his poor little homless forest friends.
This was not a flame.
Your sex scenes are pretty amature there are alot of things you should have done before writting these.
Your wording and grammar does need some work.
I LOVE THE PAIRINGS! They are like my favorite ones!!
Pyc
Michelle

Okay awesome smut, but what is with "They'll be none the wiser", lol.

We of BSST object on principle to incest-slash. Gay boys do not lust after their siblings nor do siblings usually feel the desire to start boffing each other "just because".

We would ask you, the author of this fic, to contemplate sex with your sibling and see how fast you run away screaming "PERISH THE THOUGHT!"

We also note that you seem to have no understanding of the mechanics of gay sex, such as the fact that lubricant (even that old stand-by, Vaseline) is a necessity, not an option, unless there is some serious kink involved.

Do us all a favor and stop helping fill the pockets of the brain-bleach factory - TAKE DOWN THIS FIC!

woah. lol. I really liked it. good job.

especially the ponyboy/johnny chapter.

they're my favorite outsiders pairing. =D

hey! yay ferret u finally updated!! i've only been harassing you for what? 3 weeks now? you're a week after when you promised youd update...im very disappointed in you sis...bah, u no i cant stay annoyed at you. AWESOME CHAPTER...tehn again all ur chappies r awesome. NICE JOB SIS!

these are some of the weirdest slashes I have read
but you should be proud of that

lol. yay ferret! slashy slash of slashful slashiness! we really have to start that jpxss...i no it has nothing watsoever 2 do wit outsiders, but i dont care. slash freaks 4ever!...SLASH!! update soon! wats the next chappie gonna b again? wen are u gonna do a Two-Bit X Soda? lol yay random... lol ttyl ferret!

incest is anyone that is related that has sexualt relations, ex) parents/children, siblings; anybody related by blood basically

good job

Wow lol... umm incest is what you just wrote. It's family members engaging in sexual acts with each other- and you should probably put a warning label at the top of the page to warn readers so that they don't get offended by what they read below...but lol that was actually so strange that it was more funny than gross. :P

cute story, and yes incest is basically when blood relatives have a sexual relationship (i.e Brother/sister brother/brother father/daughter mother/son cousin/cousin and etc.)


Incest \In"cest\, n. [F. inceste, L. incestum unchastity,
incest, fr. incestus unchaste; pref. in- not + castus chaste.
See Chaste.]
The crime of cohabitation or sexual intercourse between
persons related within the degrees wherein marriage is
prohibited by law; broadly, sexual relations between closely
related persons, usually taken as first cousins or closer.
--Shak.

i enjoyed all three chapters very much! keep it up!

this is good