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Twlight-Midnight
2008-04-17
ch 4,
abuseOkay awesome smut, but what is with "They'll be none the wiser", lol.
BSST
2007-12-15
ch 3,
abuseWe of BSST object on principle to incest-slash. Gay boys do not lust after their siblings nor do siblings usually feel the desire to start boffing each other "just because".

We would ask you, the author of this fic, to contemplate sex with your sibling and see how fast you run away screaming "PERISH THE THOUGHT!"

We also note that you seem to have no understanding of the mechanics of gay sex, such as the fact that lubricant (even that old stand-by, Vaseline) is a necessity, not an option, unless there is some serious kink involved.

Do us all a favor and stop helping fill the pockets of the brain-bleach factory - TAKE DOWN THIS FIC!
Aerliin Skylarre
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abusewoah. lol. I really liked it. good job.

especially the ponyboy/johnny chapter.

they're my favorite outsiders pairing. =D
xkidrogue
2007-10-06
ch 4,
abusehey! yay ferret u finally updated!! i've only been harassing you for what? 3 weeks now? you're a week after when you promised youd update...im very disappointed in you sis...bah, u no i cant stay annoyed at you. AWESOME CHAPTER...tehn again all ur chappies r awesome. NICE JOB SIS!
that lame loser
2007-09-28
ch 3,
abusethese are some of the weirdest slashes I have read
but you should be proud of that
xkidrogue
2007-09-16
ch 3,
abuselol. yay ferret! slashy slash of slashful slashiness! we really have to start that jpxss...i no it has nothing watsoever 2 do wit outsiders, but i dont care. slash freaks 4ever!...SLASH!! update soon! wats the next chappie gonna b again? wen are u gonna do a Two-Bit X Soda? lol yay random... lol ttyl ferret!
junecleaver
2007-07-18
ch 3, anon.
abuseincest is anyone that is related that has sexualt relations, ex) parents/children, siblings; anybody related by blood basically
dreamer 3097
2007-07-15
ch 3,
abusegood job
ccmalfoy
2007-07-14
ch 3,
abuseWow lol... umm incest is what you just wrote. It's family members engaging in sexual acts with each other- and you should probably put a warning label at the top of the page to warn readers so that they don't get offended by what they read below...but lol that was actually so strange that it was more funny than gross. :P
shikongewl
2007-07-14
ch 3,
abusecute story, and yes incest is basically when blood relatives have a sexual relationship (i.e Brother/sister brother/brother father/daughter mother/son cousin/cousin and etc.)


Incest \In"cest\, n. [F. inceste, L. incestum unchastity,
incest, fr. incestus unchaste; pref. in- not + castus chaste.
See Chaste.]
The crime of cohabitation or sexual intercourse between
persons related within the degrees wherein marriage is
prohibited by law; broadly, sexual relations between closely
related persons, usually taken as first cousins or closer.
--Shak.
Minami Ozaki Wannabe
2007-07-14
ch 3,
abusei enjoyed all three chapters very much! keep it up!
dreamer 3097
2007-07-11
ch 2,
abusethis is good
dreamer 3097
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abusegood one
ccmalfoy
2007-07-10
ch 2,
abuseum...lol-- this is pretty funny. weird but funny. I think you definately have the wrong rating though lol
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