Well, the drabble in and of itself wasn't bad. I liked the last line a lot, too (poor Zuzu)! Although, you technically tell the story in third person omniscient, as opposed to first person. If it was first person, you would have said, "Katara's hand was soothing on my cheek," instead. Just a small quibble...

Also, I think you should use just as good grammar, spelling, and punctuation in your summaries and author's notes as you do in the story. You're really doing yourself a disservice by not doing so, because I think more people would read and review if you did. Just my two cents, though, so feel free to take it or leave it. :D

Otherwise, nice start and keep it up!

Heya,

That was so cute, keep it up, kay?

Jessica

Exactly what Zuko's stare means!


KYA! SEASON THREE IS ALMOST HERER!