This is amazing! It's a brilliant story and its well written. Its fantastic.

one of the best dr who stories i've ever read! i want more! MORE!

Oh! That was a really good one, they were all in perfect character, and it was so much fun reading some of that technical jargon that I just couldn't understand, no matter how many times I re-read it. I would say to cut it up into chapters so that it's no so forboding, but really, there's just no justifying that. It's got to be read as one long read, and it wouldn't be right to section it off like that. Good job, it was fantastic.

This is so well-written, and the dialogue is perfectly in character. I enjoyed the exploration of the Doctor's past, too, and it's always fun to see Ace again. I might suggest that you repost this in smaller segments. I suspect that some readers are a bit intimidated by the length, and that's a shame because they are missing an excellent story!