 Huma The Guma 2008-03-11 . chapter 9This was a lovely story. I liked the slow, relaxed pace of it. Somehow, it wouldn't feel like House and Cameron if it wasn't relaxed adn slow, hesitant, mysterious, that sort of thing. Loved how you chose to end it, too. |
 reader2008 2008-02-23 . chapter 9oh that was cute. aw! |
 whatfear 2008-02-08 . chapter 8 wow. I really like where you're going with this stroy. You have very interesting observations about Cameron eating disorder and the backstory idea is good. Love the house lines "I miss you." Can't weight to read the rest. |
 Limaccia 2008-02-07 . chapter 8Well, I like the story. In fact, I went over to your Live Journal page since you said you posted the whole story so I could read the last chapter, Ch. 9. I couldn't find it, or anything else you might have written. I hate Live Journal. I find it very hard to navigate. |
 jagnic233 2008-02-07 . chapter 8Cool story, liked this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next |
 reader2008 2008-02-07 . chapter 8he did want her it just intensified when she left. lol. wow! i like this chapter. |
 reader2008 2008-02-04 . chapter 7i must be really out of it but i'm lost. i'm sorry. a little help, please. i like the plot, i do. |
 Limaccia 2008-02-04 . chapter 7Wow, only 2 more chapters! Seems like you'd need more to get it resolved. Oh well. Anyway, you have some really insightful thoughts. These were my 2 favorite bits from Ch. 2 & Ch. 7:
"She doesn’t want to go, but she will anyway, because she won’t change out of her pj’s for herself, but she will if someone else needs her to do something."
That's so true for some people; it's certainly the way I am. I can't trust myself to do anything if I've only promised myself to do it. And also, so sad:
"She’s accepted this is who she is, and she’s at peace with it. She may not like it much, may not like herself much, but she’s too scared of trying to change and finding she’s just too broken for it." |
 jagnic233 2008-02-04 . chapter 7wow, great chapter, can't wait till the next one. |
 misanthropicbastard 2008-02-04 . chapter 5Great story. Love your storytelling skills too. Wonderful job. |
 reader2008 2008-02-02 . chapter 6oh she's a cutter. oh boy! |
 reader2008 2007-09-28 . chapter 5poor poor chase. but house and cameron belong together. lol. |
 the psycho sour skittle 2007-09-09 . chapter 4I'm liking this. |
 spunkymonkey5712 2007-09-08 . chapter 4aw, poor Cameron. I hope you tell us soon what's up with Cameron's family. ^_^ |
 reader2008 2007-09-08 . chapter 4okay...so will this turn into a ham in the middle? |