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Huma The Guma
2008-03-11 . chapter 9
This was a lovely story. I liked the slow, relaxed pace of it. Somehow, it wouldn't feel like House and Cameron if it wasn't relaxed adn slow, hesitant, mysterious, that sort of thing. Loved how you chose to end it, too.
reader2008
2008-02-23 . chapter 9
oh that was cute. aw!
whatfear
2008-02-08 . chapter 8
wow. I really like where you're going with this stroy. You have very interesting observations about Cameron eating disorder and the backstory idea is good. Love the house lines "I miss you." Can't weight to read the rest.
Limaccia
2008-02-07 . chapter 8
Well, I like the story. In fact, I went over to your Live Journal page since you said you posted the whole story so I could read the last chapter, Ch. 9. I couldn't find it, or anything else you might have written. I hate Live Journal. I find it very hard to navigate.
jagnic233
2008-02-07 . chapter 8
Cool story, liked this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next
reader2008
2008-02-07 . chapter 8
he did want her it just intensified when she left. lol. wow! i like this chapter.
reader2008
2008-02-04 . chapter 7
i must be really out of it but i'm lost. i'm sorry. a little help, please. i like the plot, i do.
Limaccia
2008-02-04 . chapter 7
Wow, only 2 more chapters! Seems like you'd need more to get it resolved. Oh well. Anyway, you have some really insightful thoughts. These were my 2 favorite bits from Ch. 2 & Ch. 7:

"She doesn’t want to go, but she will anyway, because she won’t change out of her pj’s for herself, but she will if someone else needs her to do something."

That's so true for some people; it's certainly the way I am. I can't trust myself to do anything if I've only promised myself to do it. And also, so sad:

"She’s accepted this is who she is, and she’s at peace with it. She may not like it much, may not like herself much, but she’s too scared of trying to change and finding she’s just too broken for it."
jagnic233
2008-02-04 . chapter 7
wow, great chapter, can't wait till the next one.
misanthropicbastard
2008-02-04 . chapter 5
Great story. Love your storytelling skills too. Wonderful job.
reader2008
2008-02-02 . chapter 6
oh she's a cutter. oh boy!
reader2008
2007-09-28 . chapter 5
poor poor chase. but house and cameron belong together. lol.
the psycho sour skittle
2007-09-09 . chapter 4
I'm liking this.
spunkymonkey5712
2007-09-08 . chapter 4
aw, poor Cameron. I hope you tell us soon what's up with Cameron's family. ^_^
reader2008
2007-09-08 . chapter 4
okay...so will this turn into a ham in the middle?
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