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| Touch of the Wind 2008-04-20 ch 7, | abuseExcellent...poor Greg...he always gets hurt...but we do love it deep down...LOL! |
| Zaik of Wake 2008-01-22 ch 7, | abuseDid you make a sequel? If you did, IK'm so reading it. If not, that's just false hope right there. |
| Cat 2007-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting start. One major typo though. You are using thou instead of though. Though is the correct usage. Thou refers to an archaic using of "you" and is rarely seen in modern English. |
| Pip4 2007-08-21 ch 6, | abuseYay, they found Greg, that's great. I'm really glad you're not writing this as a slash fic. I like your story for the most part. If you're up for a little bitof constructive critisism, you may want to add a little bit of detail in a few spots. |
| HikaruOfDreams 2007-08-15 ch 5, | abuseLooking forward to the next update! |
| racefh853629 2007-08-10 ch 4, | abuse::hugs Greg:: Poor baby! Can't wait for more! |
| sasukesmyemo394 2007-08-09 ch 4, | abusewhoa that was really good. i like it ^^ |
| kitsune 2007-07-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseinteresting... poor greg. I can't wait for your next update! |
| BandGeekDrummer 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic and I look forward to seeing future chappys. I really think you have talent and I enjoyed every word. =D Brett |
| xxCSILoverxx 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseGood start for the fic! Poor Greg, he's being hounded by those reporters. plz update soon as i can't wait to read more! xoxo Luv From xoxo, xxCSILoverxx |