that is so damn CUTE ^^ omg though its short i love it aw i could imagine tats and yuki doin that

Aw. Little Ta-kun is so cute.

...'adorable', 'astounding' 'perfect'... All of those words work to describe it, but none of them are good enough for what you've written here. You do a great job with a kiddy-Tatsuha, and Eiri, too.
I love works focusing on the dynamics between Eiri and Tatsuha; there are too few of them! And you do an amazing job of it; the whole story builds up to that last line, and it makes it perfect. It would be good without it, but it just ties everything together. I'd love to see more, but I have a feeling that would destroy the balance you managed to get.
Love it!
~Linker27

I don't know how many hits you're getting on this, but I hope it's far more than the reviews would indicate. There's too little done with the brotherly relationship that created the two adults we know and love. This is charmingly simple and touching, IC with both the boys and the story, and the final line is utter perfection. As with any good short story and esp a short short like this, every sentence in the story sets it up, yet it's still unexpected. (To those who haven't read it, no fair reading it out of sequence!)

Beautifully done.

I don't have many stories on my favs list, but this is going on it.

So cute. Really swell done too, don't worry about getting a chibi-Tatsuha wrong it fitted the image of Tatsuha shrunk down to eight. WELL DONE!