Reviews for Crossover and Out

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Donteatacowman 2008-07-01 ch 2,	abuseNeat chapter. I've never seen The Twilight Zone, but I have seen the Simpsons's spoof on this. Good job.
A Tye 2008-06-07 ch 1,	abuseI just watched the first episode of The Prisoner recently, so I found this hilarious. First rate, like all of your fic.
Thomas Linquist 2008-03-11 ch 4,	abuseSo who will keep the tweebs in line?
storyreader51 2008-03-08 ch 4,	abuseQuick question: Who gets the Series IV Atomizer and who gets the Noisy Cricket? At least you didn't break up the team... I'm surprised Barkin isn't an alien. If you continue this thread, I wanna see Jeebs get shot.
Mortal Guardian 2008-02-03 ch 4,	abuse“Yeah, we’ve got a pretty talented guy on staff who helps with that stuff. Actually, he’s been at it for centuries,” Zed said. “I think you know him: Wade Load.” Just how old IS Wade - in this crossover?
Eddy13 2008-01-23 ch 4,	abuseDude, you have got to make a full-fledge story out of this! It has SO much potential! Agents KP and RS could have awesome adventures. I can image them encountering the bugs. Ron's primary weapon would probably the Noisy Cricket. I can also think of a good joke he could use after blasting an alien: "How about that? I took down a cockroach with a cricket!". When you finish up Stoppable's Island, ES: BMOC, Crossover and Out, and SNTEOTW, you should consider making a fic out of this.
donalddeutsch 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseNever seen the show "The Prisoner", but it sounds like it would have been funny and good. Love the story of Crossover tidbits, and have read a few of your KP stories so far. New to writing KP, and finding the stories quite interesting and insightful in helping me with mine, which will be covering from young age to 18. Keep up the good work. Mines a crossover with Harry Potter to clear that part up.
conan98002 2008-01-15 ch 4,	abuse“Because these are the last suits either of you will ever wear …” tightwad
Molloy 2008-01-10 ch 4,	abuse“One of the most disturbing discoveries one can make is that the world is not human … and that we are not human, either.” – Clarice Lispector It has been a while since I saw the first MIB movie, but this meshed with my memories pretty well. I liked how the recruitment grew out of Ron’s moves with the Lorwardians while, at the same time, it revealed the secret MIB world--how those two were not the only alien threat to the earth on that night. The interplay between the MIB regulars definitely conveyed the sense that this wasn’t going to be as stuffy an organization as GJ—or at least the way Will Du would have GJ be—nice parting shot on him by the way. The decision of Kim and Ron to forego their families was amusingly, if not entirely convincingly, resolved. I suspect this might have been the biggest narrative hurdle (or possibly have developed into the major plot hinge) to this one-shot becoming its own full-fledged epic. I liked how Wade and Rufus turned out to be on the “payroll” (i.e. aliens); that actually explains quite a bit. I can definitely see Kim and Ron in those suits, too. And you have to like a story that uses the word “bellicose.” However, there was one twist, one element that I was expecting that didn’t happen--Ron learning that Kim was an alien, too. And, of course, not caring once he did.
mr.the.ninja 2008-01-09 ch 4,	abuseI like the ending note... The last suits they ever wear... and when is kim ever going to cash in on the sodas ron owes her? might make an interesting story... good read as always.
bigherb81 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuseNice especially like the worst case scenerios used to get them to join up. Really digging these crossover stories you got going here looking forward to see what you got planned next.
Samurai Crunchbird 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuseMrDrP, I love the MIB treatment. Wade and Rufus on the payroll?? Priceless!! Just one thing, though troubles me. If Keven became Agent K, what will Kim become...'Agent KP'?? I applaud you once again. Your friend in writing, The Samurai Crunchbird
Brimmstone 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abusePlease continue the MIB fic. It just shows so much promise. I can see Ron and J teaming up to make K crack a smile.
Isamu 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuseI was going to say that I don't think either of them would be keen on ditching out on there famalies (well, maybe Ron if Hana wasn't around...), but the prospect of being a Monkey and DNAmy's cell mate, yeah... I'd sign that dotted line too! I really liked that Yori didn't seduce Ron away, but when weird on him and turned him into a Monkey. So, so much more MiB. Not really sure why they'd make it so everyone remembers the Yankies doing so well in the 90's, but sure. Wade and Rufus being on staff was a great little add on. Again, makes some sorta weird sense. So would they be agents KP and RS just P and S? I love these things...
whitem 2008-01-04 ch 4,	abuseOh man, Dude! This a Golden Opportunity! It's almost a must for this to be continued on... One thing that popped into my head immediately was the interaction between Ron and Worm Guys would be hilarious! I busted out laughing about Will Du being Neuralized. What I want to know is what planet Drakken and Shego are from. After all, their disguises aren't that good. One comment though: In the movies, I thought the MIB just made people disappear, not wipe out any record of their existence. My mind is racing with many scenes and Possibilities here...

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