that was a really good ending, if i do say so myself (and i do). Lolz

dude's life is. fucked. up!

Wonderful story! Thanx for uploading

Great work, really enjoyed it!

OMG! I absolutely love love love this story! Great Job!

again.. loved the story!

I saw the trailer and i cant wait to finish it!

this is really good!
i enjoyed all of it and you did a good job of keeping the characters pretty much in character! =)
from beginning to end, i was stunned by the awesomeness of it all.
i liked how sam took the relationship, but what about emily?
did she go crazy phsyco like rachel or wat?
id appreciate ot if you replied with that answer for me.

i give it a 10/10! amazing awe inspiring work!

Well I Decided To Write All Of My Opinions In One Review So Here Goes:
Well Let Me Start By Saying I Did Enjoy this, However There Are Some Things I Would Change.

1."CHAPTER 22 RACHEL"
I Honestly Don't Think George Would Invite A Girl he Doesn't Know To Stay In The House, Espiecially For The Purpose He Informed Derek Of. I Do However Believe He Would Set Up A Date For Derek And Loved That Detail to The Story For It Was An Interesting Twist!
2."CHAPTER 25 PROOF"
I Find It Hard To Believe That Sam Would Threaten Derek About Telling His Parents About Casey And Derek. It Seems To Me He's More Connected To Derek Then Casey And So I Can Only Assume That He Would Stand By Derek ,Rather Then Think Of Casey, Even If He Did Still Feel For Her, Knowing It Wouldn't Accomplish Anything. And If I Were To Believe He Was Heated Enough To Threaten, He Wouldn't Just Drop It In The Snap Of A Finger. Other Than Those Two Out Of Character Situations I Loved The Length! Not As In The Quantity Of Chapters But The Vast Amount Of Content Within. I Absolutly Love How You Include The Brewing Relationship Between Edwin And Lizzie. Off Topic, Have You Ever Thought Of Writing A Fic Strictly About Lizzie And Edwin Instead Of Including Them In A Dasey? Just A Thought. Anyways, I Don't Think You Give Yourself Enough Credit For Your Endings. You Lack No Talent There .I Really Liked The Idea Of A Fast Forward There, So Job Well Done. And Although This Is Only The Third Story Of Yours I Have Read I Liked It And Felt Compelled To Write This Review.I Will Be Looking Forward To Reading The Rest Of Your Works And You Can Bet I Will Be Sure To Review!! Well I'm Off To Read The One-shot Now So Farewell!

i like your stories except for the Dark Dasey one

yeah
after reading about the date
i dont feel so special anymore
why did i have to have such a common name?
gr
i blame my mom naming me after my grandmother

i feel so special
cause my name is rachel
and i brown hair but not blue eyes
darn it
even though its not specifically talking about it
i dont like this story
i LOVE it

i love not only the whole story, but also this ending. it rocked! i love your plot!
P.S. I too have and evil twin sister. her name is stacey!

AHH love it! i watched the video on youtube too!

omg i loved this story it left me tingling every where it was that good hope to read more of your work !