 Asj Johnson 2007-07-11 . chapter 1Well, yours was the only one this round that actually got me interested in reading... There was several spelling errors, especially near the end, but I still think it was better than the rest... It’s amazing that there were so many boring ones, after that last round...
Téa’s loneliness problem seems pretty realistic. I’ve had times like that... It’s so hard to think of things to say to old friends, but you want to talk to them and have fun like you used ta... Only thing that helps is to find new friends or something you really like doing...
Didja get this from me? (If so, I’m glad you did, ’cause I never even considered Téa’s point of view)
“The King of Games then went off to tour the world, competing in various tournaments with his expenses funded by Kaiba himself, so long as Yuugi advertised some of his products once in a while. He was currently in Egypt, visiting the Ishtars and joining Rebecca Hopkins, who followed in her grandfather’s footsteps and was starting her career as an archeologist, seeing as she already finished college.” |