fuck. that was awesome.
'nuff said.

Thumbs up for the mild Sakura bashing at the beginning. I don't really hate her, per se. I just loathe her every being and wish with all my heart that she simply drop dead.

But no, I don't hate her.

Great ending. Both stooping past their pride and allowing the chemistry. Damn my writing sucks in comparison. damn. Thank you for your story.

The mental rambling is awesome

The whole 'Capricious, fickle, malicious woman' was kickass man. I don't care if your girlfriend commits genocide because that was golden. S+ for you man

I actually did notice the Naruto cannon. The way you incorporated the scenes worked really well.

i like the 'hanging aroudn with Sai' bit.

I could eat this up forever. The hijinks continues!

Aww! I was reading your story and when I came to this chapter, I realized I was listening to a duet by Shoutaro Morikubo and Romi Paku (voice actors for Shikamaru and Temari) and I thought "oh how perfect!" Hahahaha! It's so adorable!

That is probably my favourite Shika/Tema fanfic. This is the story I spent 3 hours of reading but still worth it. And theres a 12/10 chance this is my favourite story. Great job Oh Dee!!

I really like how you got the real essence of Shikamaru and definately Temari. Sure, a lot of people describe Shikamaru as lazy, and maybe down pat too like in the manga. But Temari is always too soft, too caring and always thinks before she acts in those stories so I get mildly frustrated. YOU, are the first to get it right on.

It was obviously really touching, and I absolutely LOVE the university part.

Great job!!

This is so awesomely friken perfect!

To be honest, I didn't know what to expect of this story when I first encountered it, mostly because of its amusing title and, well, it being a high school fanfic. But chapter after chapter, you've been feeding me the beginnings of a well-written fanfic, until I became surprised, amused, hooked, and impressed. (The train scene had me in stitches.) I seriously, seriously, think this one rocks. The romantic scenes are beautifully worded, and are so romantic, in fact, that they made me sigh wistfully more than once. The ending is EXACTLY what I wanted it to be. Great job! :)

That was an amazing fic. I enjoyed every last second of it. :)

Great Story!
Just one point... The ending is far to short for my taste
Still really nice

Wow, that was so amazing. You kept saying you struggled with things, but it doesn't even look like it. You have such a nice writing style too, so easy to read, and your words flow so smoothly, it is really the easiest thing in the world to read, and the most...uhh some sort of word that means amazing...thing. Also, you had the characters in perfect character, you didn't deviate from personalities or thoughts or anything, it was all so perfect. Now, the plot, that was just pure magic! It basically read that you had everything planned from the start, and all you had left to do is put it into words, which you did perfectly and amazingly...my small vocabulary forces me to repeat myself... Yes, you are a really good writer, and I can only imagine the kind of things you would do if you made up your own characters. The way you did with Shikamaru and Temari, oh yes, it makes me want to read something purely you.
The plot was pure brilliance by the way. You turned the whole Naruto into highschool plot into something so totally original that I still can't believe. You even did your research (which is something that has always been too troublesome for me), and because of that your story seemed so real. Everything about it seemed so real. The way you progressed Temari and Shikamaru's relationship, it was in such a real way that completely matched reality. Love is never something that just suddenly happens, and Shikamaru and Temari are definitely the ones to protest that they are falling in love. Then, the way you ended everything, PERFECTION! It was so beautiful I almost cired, (which doesn't happen often) and it was all so...Yeah, I am at a loss of words over here.
Definitely a story worthy of my favorites.
I, and I am sure many other people, agree with me on this. Thank you so much for making this story and posting it so everybody could see this, we truly do thank you.
Annabelinda