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| Bubblegum Thai 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Just awesome!! I really enjoyed reading this! Great job!! |
| Dark-flames 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI'll say this nicely: 'Stop making me cry!' =) No but seriously, you capture that brother spirit so perfectly, just admit it. you're on the scriptwriting team huh.. |
| Mousitsa 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm so glad you pointed out the obvious: Dean was never really dead... people seem to forget that little detail. Wonderful story, great characterizations. Only loving brothers can fight and cry within minutes and then move on like nothing happened. Very nicely done, thank you for sharing. |
| MadMidgetTwins 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseoh my...oh my...OH MY GOD! That was so sad!! we were bawling our eyes out here!! seriously...short and...traumatising! and you put 'the blob' back into it again..lovely D'= |
| rozzy07 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWell Sifi, this was the add on to the season finale. The nightmare plaguing Sam now is the days sliding ever nearer towards the years end and the loss of his brother. Confronting Dean on his double standards Sam really does nail it on the head here about Dean's attitude to death & the dead! >“You’re a god damned hypocrite... what’s dead should stay dead? You still believe that?” Sam asked knowing he had Dean in a philosophical corner. “Unless it’s my little brother, you bet your ass I do...” Dean slid free, or so he thought.> Dean's motivation is also exposed here... anything for his Sammy. So as that clock ticks ever closer and the brothers finally talk and bitch (Yay loving sniping-snarling Sammy!) about what is to come you are left with a feeling that Hell itself really does not know what its let itself in for with the Winchester boys! Because no matter what Sam, just like his brother, will do anything to protect that which he loves most. Great one off. Rozzy |
| brighette 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseWe all know Sammy will save him somehow...but I liked that you pointed out that Dean was never dead. On the verge, sure, but never actually dead. So, plot bunny - did Sam come back 100%? Inquiring minds want to know! |
| TraSan 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abusesifi, Another wonderful, wonderful job. This was a touching and very true to character conversation between the boys. I could very easily see this taking place on the show. Squee! |
| Nvrmore 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseHey Lady, Whew! Very nicely done. Intense. I love that Dean is smart enough to realize Sam would even contemplate giving in even if it's to use it to save him. M... brings me such high hopes for next season's angst-fest. Awesome job! I'll talk with you later. |
| historylover 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseGood story, sifi! Really liked it. I agree with the points that you made. Dean, love him to death, is kind of a hypocrite. I agree--he was never dead! Really liked it. Kat |
| Ster1 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI would love to see moments like this in canon! Sam's right to be angry: Dean doesn't feel he's worth saving and Sam doesn't know how to convince him otherwise. Nicely written! |
| Nana56 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThose guys! Fight, cry, punch each other and then clink beer bottles and watch a movie side by side. I love it!! |
| CatBeist 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseHey, dang it you took me by surprise having a oneshot up... And a good one indeed! Have I mentioned you capture our boys very well? Don't think I have in a while but you do! No matter when the story is told or what is going on I feel you manage to get inside their heads and 'act' them out perfectly in your stories... A great story and a nice piece that could have been built on in every direction but does very well standing on it's own to feet... And loved the ending... The Blob - “...what’s this like...two hundred times or something by now?” Hah he took the words right out of my mind... So awesome... now late breakfast! You Rock |
| Poaetpainter 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseJeez! Your flippin right! Dean NEVER did die. "Whats dead should stay dead"?!?!? He was never dead... Damn, I never realized that. Great fic btw, thanks for the revelation. |