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| juggalettetripp 2008-07-24 ch 10, | abusenice job! |
| rosekyo 2008-07-24 ch 10, | abuseHm. Do DUmblesore was planning to have Sanpe kill them- well that backfired. I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| Anime-StarWars-fan-zach 2008-07-24 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter. So they've destroyed there first Horcrux. Interesting. Can't wait for Near and the others to die. |
| Disco-Dancing on the Roof 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseBlech, horny old people. |
| AkiraCat13 2008-07-23 ch 9, | abuselight yagami and l are awesome. This is a really good fic.Are light and mikami going to join death eaters or good wizards? Im glad that light didn't die yet in your fic because I used to read death note but then l died and then light died so I didn't like it anymore. I also read your other fics (not just death note)but this is the first one I reviewed on. I hope you keep updating because I really like all of your fanfics. |
| Anonymous 2008-07-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseI didn't think that book 7 was that bad. This story is very interesting though. Keep up the good work! |
| Dragonpearl77 2008-06-19 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next. With these new skills hopfully Raito will win against Near! |
| The Iza 2008-06-16 ch 9, | abuseI'm so glad you updated this fic! You have no idea how happy that makes me! You have such a lovely way of keeping all the characters IC. PS. More Mikami/Light action, please? |
| Lady Eivel 2008-06-15 ch 4, | abuseYou like team Kira and hate Near? Yay- you're the first person I've come across who's said that. I detest the little brat, stuck-up, self-absorbed L-wannabe that he/she (looks and sounds like a girl to me) is... And I am enjoying this story. Haven't read it all yet, but am going to read the rest now. :) |
| mrawgirl09 2008-06-14 ch 9, | abuseYour'e right. they both ROCK. so does Light. and bastard!Light. i miss Ryuk! nice story, really. LOVE it. |
| Disco-Dancing on the Roof 2008-06-14 ch 9, | abuseSnape and Dumbledore seemed IC enough to me (but I've been reading so many AUs lately, I can't even tell anymore). I am crazy curious to see what happens next! |
| Shiruwanasu 2008-06-14 ch 9, | abuseI screamed from joy when I saw that you updated! Snape is IC I don't know 'bout Dumbly...he is? |
| Anime-StarWars-fan-zach 2008-06-13 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter. Hmm...perhaps you could have Snape provide Light with a picture of Voldy, and his real name? Or manipulate Dumby with the Note to make him reveal Voldy's real name and face? You could also make a sub-plot with Harry confronting Dumby about Kira being in the Wizarding World. Maybe you could also do a sub-plot with Draco joining Voldy to avenge his father's death? And, what does IC mean? Oh, In character. Yes, I'd say they are. Maybe you could do something with Near, the taskforce, and the SPK, since you seem to be ignoring them lately? Like having Light kill them, or something? I'll PM you if I get any other ideas. Again, great chapter. |
| Alessia Riddle 2008-06-13 ch 9, | abuseI really like this fic. It took long enough to update, but I feel it's a good thing I stuck with it now. Okay, so as for continuing it or ideas, you need to find a way for Light to meet with Voldemort. It'd probably be really OC for either of them to sway from their ways (Or make peace with each other) so the story could go well if it revolved a little around their relations. I love the way you made Snape, by the way; I die a little inside when people make him up to be some near-perfectly kindhearted idiot like Dumbledore (No offense to Dumbledore; he is my favorie kindhearted idiot). |
| Miss. Edith needs her tea. 2008-06-05 ch 8, | abusethis is cool! i can't wait for the next update! but with Harry could you have Light sway him to his side? or have him on his side kinda like Mikami? you could still do the prophacy (sp?) and fit Harry into it...well it was worth a shot. well bye, update soon! |