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Gyre
2008-08-19
ch 3,
abuseEnjoyable. As for first contact, why come to japan at all? Why not have Ranma feel Megatron's awakening? Another possibility is Starcream comes a calling, seeking to rebuild his forces after the
battle in Mission City. Of course Ranma's time on the net might get noticed by Frenzy, and that is what draws interest in Japan.
Kool Moe D.
2008-08-13
ch 3,
abuseGood Transformers/Ranma fanfic. Keep on keepin on.
Dragon Man 180
2008-08-11
ch 3,
abuseI think Bumblebee would listen to Ranma if he saw Ranma protecting the Tendo family from a Decepticon. I can't wait to see what happens when Ranma's robot form is finally revealed. If Ranma wanted to be cute he could try to copy a Gundam toy as his machine form.
DarkHeart of Ice
2008-08-11
ch 3,
abuseWell, I would say keep the movie vehicle/transformations with the exception of Prime. I would consider having his TF: Cybertron vehicle/transformation, due to the fact that when in vehicle mode he could convert from firetruck to a jet type mode. That way, in the event that the spark signal from Ranma's lifespark is detected by the autobots, then Ranma would have the ability to talk with Prime as he had talked about. That's what I would do, but this is your story(which I am enjoying reading it), do what you feel your inspiration is leading you to.

Thanx--DarkHeart >=P

DON'T GET ELIMINATED!!
AshK
2008-08-10
ch 3,
abuseNice work! Keep up the great work!

Sincerely,
AshK
chm01
2008-08-09
ch 3,
abusethis si probably the most original ranmaxover i've seen so far
ranma girl 14
2008-08-09
ch 3,
abuseGreat chapter, it should probably be best if he met with a decepticon first.
plz plz plz update soon! ^_^
kowr
2008-06-19
ch 1,
abuseI realy love your storie I hope you have more chapters soon.
New lord of darkness
2008-03-12
ch 2,
abuseSo, Ranma is in tructh a Tripple changer? cool.
Kitsune6
2007-12-18
ch 2,
abuseYay for Transformers. Awesome. Oh, and RxN.

Nice writing. Their personalities are all good, except Akane's a bit too quiet and reasonable.

Keep up the good work. =)
Raven Hufflepuff
2007-12-15
ch 1,
abuseIf it's a joke he should have been a Mustang.
KitsuneOverlord
2007-11-26
ch 2,
abuseWell now, a Transformers/Ranma crossover. Sounds fun. You haven't really written enough for me to be able to leave a good review, but I can tell you that this is some pretty good stuff you've made here.

Keep up the good work!
Zhuul
2007-09-29
ch 2, anon.
abuseThank you! Thank you! Thank you! This is wonderful, for all those questioning the Decepticon emblem, a few points.
1. Autobots and Decepticons were NOT different species, they only had different philosophies.
2. Autobots sought peace and unity. Decepticons lived for battle and conflict.

With theses things in mind it makes perfect sense for Ranma to be a Decepticon, and I applaud the author for taking this direction. Please continue.
Pac Man
2007-08-28
ch 2, anon.
abuseGreat fanfic. Update this soon.
Captain Deadpool
2007-08-10
ch 2,
abuseTHIS IS SO COOL! A combination of magic and science, the plot possibilities are endless! Bravo, I cannot wait to see what you plan to do with this.
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