Maybe if he didn't act like an idiot and push her away.

Thanks for writing.

this is really wonderful... i want to see how you handle the others now!

Speaking of Tardis keys... Sound of Drums? Last Time Lord? lulz

I loved this one.

This was an interesting story, in a good way. This whole fic has been excellent, and this update is no different.

Another wonderful chapter, and I'm looking forword to the next.

I loved it, especially the end

'he passes her the TARDIS key. Unbeknownst to Martha, he’s giving her a little part of his heart at the same time'

it was so sweet! Pretty pretty please with a cherry on top update soon.
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It's funny...Often the people who predict the future don't have such a capacity for reasoning. What I think he could do is just avoid Bad Wolf Bay! But I suppose it is entirely up to me...Another point: Mother Nature probably has PLENTY of grudges against him already, so I don't know if she'll need Martha to thrash him.

I did read it and, as always, loved it.

Happy New Year!

Very good. One question. Have you changed your MSN? You never come online!

mwahahaha! evilness at every corner, 'tis. i think that either way this story was to turn, it would be somewhat dooming.
i say take it on with a metaphorical twist: have the events that occur be similar, with the meanings of the conversation be the same as the storm... only metaphorical.
its just an iea, but i thik it would be cool.
^.^ [the 13 year old has spoken!]

Love it! Please continue! 10 & Martha rock!

A very enjoyable story. And it's nice to see someone writing Ten/Martha on this site for a change.

I'd really like to encourage you to post your stories in lj communities like LifeonMartha or Smith_n_Jones. A lot of lj folks don't bother with anymore, or even Teaspoon for that matter, so I really think you are missing out on a big audience for your fics. You're very talented for your age, and I'm going to enjoy reading up on your other works.

OH MY GOD...this was too good for words. You are an AMAZING writer, this was a fantastic fic. I loved the inner battle the Doctor has with himself, I love how desperate both characters are, the Doctor desperate for company, Martha desperate to understand...it was brilliant! Absolutely brilliant :)

*Romana Dante*

(Sobs) That's so sad!