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| Professor Know-it-all 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAwe, how cute. I liked this. |
| Hanson's Angel 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseDon't know how I missed this gem, but I just now read it and I loved it -- it's never too late to give a compliment, right? Very funny (Ioki) and very great description of Tom in love -- Tom & Doug together like you wrote them is very beautiful. |
| cobalt elysium 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseLol, agreed, Doug ad Tom are mint! Really great! I loved this! You have to write more for 21 Jump Street! Loved the sneaky sleauth job Ioki does, very comical and insighting ;) Great Job! |
| AllyTCBK 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. :] The only thing I could say critically is that sometimes your sentences run-on a bit. But it was good. :] Ioki doesn't get enough attention, this is a nice change. :] |
| goodnightmysweetprince 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abusehaha mint XD great job! :P |